Galendar 631 Share Posted October 17, 2015 Character NameMarkus Henvik Goldfield-AveereBasic Information Nicknames:The Knight of BrolimundAge:20Gender:MaleRace:Human, NorthernerStatus:Content, preparing for warDescriptionHeight:6'5''Weight:200Body Type:Muscular, tonedEyes:A Dark BlueHair:Dark BrownSkin:CaucasianMarkings/Tattoos:Several scars on his lower neck and around his upper torso.Health:HealthyPersonality:Strong willed, diligent, friendly, respectful, honorableInventory:Armor, longbow, longsword, arming sword, iron banded shieldFurther Details:From a distant land known to him as Brolimund. He recognizes this as being a continent, though rather it is a small island.Life StyleAlignment:Neutral GoodDeity:The Creator/The High PontiffReligion:The One True FaithAlliance/Nation/HomeThe Holy Orenian EmpireJob/Class:Branch Manager of the North Orenian Trade CompanyHedge KnightTitle(s):Branch Manager, Knight of BrolimundProfession(s):Smith, MerchantSpecial Skill(s):Leadership/Management, ability to command in battle.Flaw(s):Confident, certain, ambitious WeaponryFighting Style:AggressiveTrained Weapon:Axe, Longsword, Arming Sword, ShieldArchery:Longbow with bodkin arrowsBiographyParents:Ceto Aveere and Averander AveereSiblings:Galendar Aveere, Lee Aveere, Elisa AveereChildren:N/aExtended FamilyThe Aveere FamilyHistoryThe early life of this bear of a man was shared without parents or siblings. It was not long after he was born that both his father, Averander, and mother, Ceto, departed for the realm known as Asulon with his siblings. In their leave, he was left to a family friend by his father whose name was simply 'Heinrik'. This man was a chieftain of one of the northern clans which the Aveere family originated, leaving young Markus in good hands. Heinrik raised the young Markus to become a soldier and leader on the battlefield, teaching him how the clan politics worked and how to assert his place as the leader once he had passed on.It would not be but fifteen years before Heinrik passed, leaving the men within the massive clan to enter the sparring arena to fight to the death for control of the clan. Markus, only sixteen, went on to defeat men twice his age and strength through the talents taught to him by his adopted father, leading him to retain control of the clan and lead, should he choose. In this case, though, he did not. His interest in his family lead him to depart the clan, leaving the title of Chieftain behind for others to squabble over. This would lead him to wandering until the age of twenty where he would arrive on the continent of Vailor.Markus was unsure of what to think, upon his arrival only seeing death and destruction. Humans were fighting Humans while the other races squabbled over what little it is they could control, being meaningless to the expansive Orenian Empire. The self entitled 'Knight of Brolimund' would become a title he had used to introduce himself to many upon his arrival to Felsen, though it seemed it would matter little in this big world of politics. Shortly following, Markus met a man by the name of Gloop who he ended up employing under as a Branch Manager, smith, contractor, and mercenary leader of a sect of the Northern Orenian Company. Artwork 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HereticTakao 16 Share Posted October 17, 2015 (edited) I honestly feel like there can be more work put into this.The description needs more detail to it, something that will give me a mental image of this character. Also describe is combat styles, how he does them. I suggest toning down the amount of weapons he is trained in. He is what, twenty? Expand on his familial relationships as well! What's his opinion on his parents/siblings? Those are a few things I like to point on in the character profile. If you like to see more hit me up in a DM! =^w^= Edited October 17, 2015 by Warrior_Takao 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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