[Denied] [Pending] Application

[ComidoreMalcolm 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ComidoreMalcolm

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: all of them they are very well thought out

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? looking for a roleplay server that is straight roleplay

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: You play as a certain role and you stick to it

What is metagaming?: knowing something your not suppose to ingame

What is powergaming?: trying to gear your character to be Over-Powered in a roleplaying enviroment

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jack Kubulsky

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I was born high up in the mountains of Vailor, my father was a faithful soldier in the Holy Oren Empire. My father trained me in bows and i soon became a great marksman, my father died when i was 13 and mother never got over it. in mothers sorrow she sent to go find a job to help buy food, i was hired by a caravan to ship good across the Empire, on my travels my caravan was attacked and my caravan was destroyed with only me and two of my men lived. when i went back to the caravan office but i was blamed for it and was sent away as a punishment. . so i am now going to find adventure.

Personality Traits: happy nice to get along with

Ambitions: want to become a soldier

Strengths/Talents: Marksmenship

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Swordmanship

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6.6 feet tall high 200 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

Edited November 18, 2015 by ComidoreMalcolm

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

Please choose a favourite rule.

Your definition of Powergaming is partially incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

The appearance you have described does not follow your racial guidelines. Humans shouldn't be taller than 6ft.

I also have a problem with this 'unknown virus'. It doesn't really fit into the Lord of the Craft lore - or even the real world. Please change or simply remove that part -- and fix your skin accordingly.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

All that you changed was the unknown virus and skin. Please read through my previous post and make those changes as well.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.