sabermarks application

[sabermark 0]

Minecraft Account Name: sabermark

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST/USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm 15 years old i live in New York after summer i will go to 10th grade and i'm a huge fan of minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:14 a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: december 2010

-What do you know about roleplaying?you take the role of a character and make its destiny.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it would be awsome to play as a dwarf

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on anarchy

role play servers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. dwarf , elf ,human, orc.

-How did you hear about us?:the player machineliam

-Did you vote?: yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: no vandalism and no stealing.

-What was your least favourite Law?:I like them all

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?sabermark

In-Character-:

-Character Name:Anthony Quinn

-What is your Race?: dwarf

-Biography: I was born in a mine near the dwarfern capital. Grew up in a regular family without any siblings . When i was 15 my father went to war agains the orcs but never came back . My mother died when i was 27 . Since the loss of my mother i was looking for a place to live and how to get by . Everyday i think of how i need a home.

-Character Age: 29

-Character Appearance: brown hair , light skin , blue eyes.

-Character Personality: I am a dwarf who makes friends easy, i don't go into many battles but i am friendly becouse of a hard life i was living .I am loyal too my friends.

-Your ambitions:to kill monsters and live in a city.

-Can your character read or write?: he can read and write.

-Can your character mine?:yes.

-Are you a capable builder? yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

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-Enjoy Farming?:yes.

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-Does your character have any special skills?:] mineing.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/38/imagescaorsvg6.jpg/

[NairOG 1]

Bio needs work.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

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