[Denied] Whitelist Application Rittmann

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Rittmann

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Well... I'm 18 soo i'm not afraid.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, more or less i agree with all of them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I like that you cannot kill another players without a rp reason.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend Amadeus Glaciem (Balorien) invited me.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplaying means playing a charachter just like you "play" yourself in real life. A charachter is a different person.

What is metagaming?: metagaming when you use out of charachter information in charachter. Such as someone steal from your chest, he tells you oocly you cannot just simply "find out" that he done it and blame him icly.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when your charachter is stronger than any other one. Such as "a halfling kill a troll with a single punch, and the troll can't do anything, cuz the halflings great agility." your charachter cannot deflect all the arrows and such becosue he is "godlike".

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jason Rarewood

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Halfling

Character’s age: 13

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Jason was born in a small town called Arrowden. Arrowden is located in the great lands of Urguan. The Lord of Arrowden was Amadeus Glaciem, an another halfling. Jason's parents died by the hands of orc. Amadeus adopted Jason, and grew him like he is his own child. At the age of 9 Jason had to leave Arrowden. Alongside with Amadeus he moved to Willow Bottom, and live with the other halflings. Jason never forgot the face of the orc that killed his parents. He remember it well. He promised to revenge his parents and torture the orc to death. However he is still young, he don't understand how this world goes. Well I hope he will before he got himself killed.

Personality Traits: mastermind, athletic body.

Ambitions: Music, dancing, cooking

Strengths/Talents: cooking, dancing, drawing.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: agressive, weak.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/4983617/farmer-boy/

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-The minimum age for applying for a character is 18.

 

-Your biography is far too short.

 

-HAving one's character's parents be killed by orcs than vowing revenge is extremely cliche and overused.

 

-You need to expand upon all your extra charcter info.

 

-You failed to include a description of your character's appearence.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

Edited November 28, 2015 by Quavinir_Tinuvial

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.