[Denied] [Pending] My Application.

[OpaqueGlass 17]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: OpaqueGlass

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Metagaming,/ Powergaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The Villanie rules thing, I don't get how you say that you may not do anything to harm another characters player, but then later on it says you can torture them...

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I love role play servers, and I came across Minecraft Server List, which said you are  a great RP Server, so I wanted to come and play.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a game not as you, but as a character who is different to you, and having fun being different, and trying different ways to be a person.

What is metagaming?: Dying or something, then remembering what happened before that, like running into an enemy tactic office, taking in all the infomation, imeediatly getting shot, then telling your team when you respawn. Also if you use stuff from outside the game like OOC stuff, to help you inside the game,  then that is meta-gaming.

What is powergaming?: Say you got stabbed in the chest, and you were made of stone, but you still died, and the person who stabbed you just took your money and ran away, that would not happen, because you can't stab stone in the chest, but they still did it, so that would be power-gaming (I think, I just got this from a source and adapted it to my own words)

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jake Glass

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race:  Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age: 40

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Jake Glass is a Mountain  dwarf, he is a kind and understanding person, but has a hate for all Elves, this was since years ago, when he was a child, he was shunned and herded away from his mountain settlement by the local dwarves, who thought him to be a weakling, this was because he was in a small party that went across the land to watch over Oren, they saw his army halted there, and at the sight of Oren, Jake had passed out, because of the strength, radiating from Oren, for that they banished him, and sent him away. He ran for days through the forest until he came upon the house of a forest dwarf, it was on fire, and elves were killing the dwarf, so ever since, he has hated all elves.

He has no relatives, as they were all lost when he was forced from his mountain settlement, he hopes to one day find them again, and is loyal to anyone who will help him.

Personality Traits: Long Red beard, reaches about to his elbows, two large dreadlocks down front of him, and free flowing hair down his back, deep green eyes, and a significant lack in muscle for his race.

Ambitions: To become stronger, and one day find his family.

Strengths/Talents: Talent in close quarter combat since he has had to deal with several bear attacks in the woods, is good at path-finding because of running around the country side lots, good eyesight.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Weak, can't lift a large axe above his head.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Shorter than most dwarves, 4.7 foot about, a bit of a chubby stomach and face.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://imgur.com/wzpH62v

 

 

Edited December 4, 2015 by OpaqueGlass

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

The villainy rule says that if a player is uncomfortable with the roleplay that is going on, like the graphic torture, then you have to change how you are roleplaying it. We don't want people feeling uncomfortable and becoming upset over roleplay, however you can't use it as an excuse to get out of a sticky situation.

Your definition of Metagaming is vague, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for dwarves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Your Biography contains a cliché story. Please expand or change it to something more original. Why does your dwarf hate elves? Elves don't run around killing dwarves.

Please fill in your personality traits (~3) -- these are not physical attributes or appearance.

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make requested edits to the application within the given 24 hour period. Specifically those quoted below.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for dwarves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Your Biography contains a cliché story. Please expand or change it to something more original. Why does your dwarf hate elves? Elves don't run around killing dwarves.

Please fill in your personality traits (~3) -- these are not physical attributes or appearance.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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