[Accepted] My Application

[john123 0]

out of character information

What's your mine craft account name?:My mine craft account name is johnmc10 

How old are you?:I'm 13 years old

Are you aware of the server is PG 13?:Yes I'm aware of the PG 13 rating 

Have you read and agreed to the the rules?:Yes I have read and I accept the rules 

What's the rule you agree with the most?:I agree most with the no cyber bullying rule

Are there any rules that confuse you or don't make sense?:No all the rules are reasonable and make sense 

How did you find out about lord of the craft? I found out about lord of the craft through server lists when i searched fore role-play servers

 

definitions 

What is role-playing? role-playing is when you create a character to play with other peoples characters 

What is meta-gaming? meta-gaming is when a player acts on knowledge they would have no way of knowing other than outside of game methods Skype, team speak and other methods 

what is power-gaming? power-gaming is when a player makes chooses an action another player no freedom to act,  for example archer shoots at wizard killing him 

 

In character information 

 

Character's name :Vartan  

Character's sex:Male     

character's race:High elf 

character's age: 128 years old 

Biography: Vartan was a young high elf boy he lived with his mother and father his mother a breeder and father an alchemist they lived on the edges of Haelun'or they often enjoyed hunting until they met a pack of wolves the alpha was a silver wolf with eyes as yellow as the sun it jumped onto his father taking his arm clean off as Vartan watched in horror luckily his older brother stepped out he cast a spell of fire launching it at the wolf it missed but hit close enough to frighten the wolf they began to run back to the city his father took weeks to be nursed back to health he was devastated he dedicated his life to being great at something that being alchemy Vartan saw this he decided he would be great at something this lead to him enrolling in an elven college amassing knowledge of various things over the years at the age of 67 he was happy with the knowledge he gained and returned to his family home he continued his studies at home as he was hungry for knowledge. 

 

after 10 years of being home he grew very bored and set off to have an adventure setting off to find the ways of the forest to further expand his horizons in hopes of one day finding that wolf that mutilated his father after 9 years in the forest he found a wood elf woman he fell in love with her from the moment she jumped down from that tree and pressed a spear against his neck they later married 10 years later he found a wolf that looked very similar like the one that maimed his father "it must be a descendant of that wolf that hurt him" he thought to himself only this ones larger the battle raged on for 5 minutes he held his ground for a while but the wolf had more energy than he did it bit his arm as he screamed in pain he could no longer hold his spear it was going to finish him for sure when his wife and a band of wood elf's rode in on their horses they threw there spears at the wolf one striking it downing it vartan slumped over to the wolf taking his dagger from his belt he took it to the wolf stabbing its heart he collapsed, when he woke up he was in his bed with a leaf bandage around him his wife gone she had been needed he read the torn piece of paper on his bed it read "Vartan I'm sorry I'm needed else where I don't know if I'll ever be back I'm going to miss you" he returned to his home he vowed to go and find some actual adventure and not be distracted by anything any more.              

Personality:My character is a wise elf he prefers to plan his battles but can't always prepare he is very suspicious of new people that he meets, he is curious in nature leading him to question others behaviour he loves knowledge and is proud of his high elf heritage                                                                                                                            

Ambitions:His main ambition is to be great at something and to find love he wants to gain wealth but keep it to his moral code

 

Strength/talents: His talent is hunting and the ways of the forest, he has a great judge of character and a talent for learning new things 

 

Weakness's/inability:His main weakness is he is too suspicious of people that he meets, he is a bad miner and not very stealthy  

 

Appearance:He is a silver haired smartly dressed high elf with long ears and hair he is a tall elf and slim

 

                    

          

Edited December 6, 2015 by john123
it was not up to specification

[Greener 687]

Under review

[Greener 687]

Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

• Please present your application in the proper format which is found here https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/125096-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Please space out each question, check other applications to see how they've laid their application out. If you need any help doing this feel free to pm me. 
• Your biography is good but needs more lore. Since you're a High Elf I suggest reading this http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Haelun'or to include more lore such as more locations than just the silver city. Remember we are currently in Vailor though. 
• Your meta gaming and powergaming definitions are wrong the correct examples can be found here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but remember to phrase your answer in your own way. Do not plagiarize.
•  Your biography is also slightly cliché under the lines of avenging a family member and a dead parent. Try and expand your character a bit more than just seeking revenge on a wolf. The way your character also kills the wolf may be considered powergaming. A wolf of that size would definitely put up a good fight. If you need any suggestions or help with this feel free to message me. 
• Finally please fix some grammar mistakes such as capital letters.

You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

[Greener 687]

Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good work on fixing the mistakes especially with the definitions. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me. 

[Greener 687]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Fireheart 2777]

Implemented!