My application to LOTC (5th or 3rd attempt?)

[Luke8611 0]

Out Of Character

-Minecraft Account Name:Luke8611

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Sweden, western Europe

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes, but we all make misstakes once

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: when i come home ffrom school i like to take something to eat because the food in school does not taste really good, after that i might play with my dog, then i usually goes to my computer and starts up a game on it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:most of the days, depends on what happens, due to school i might not be online all the time but i will be enough online to be active.

-How long have you played minecraft?:a while

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i know its about taking youre role, being someone you wish to be but not yourself (usually). I know how to roleplay and ive done it a while, ive been doing roleplay on games like roblox and i have also done it in real life.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i except this to be great

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:well actully this is the first big server that im joining. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:i agree with the rules and i have read the lore

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Elves, Dwarfs and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:i saw youre ads.

-Did you vote?:yes.

-What was your favourite Law?:all of them

-What was your least favourite Law?:i liked them all. But still, laws dosnt always work as they should, but these seems to work.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Luke8611 In-Character:

-Character Name:Argor

-What is your Race?:Human, Northerner

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Luke8611

-Biography:Argor hates to see people suffering, he is unknown to people. When he was 15 years old he and his parents got captured by bandits, the bandits took everything they had but suddenly, it started to strike lightnings and the undead attacked the bandit camp, Argor took his chance and tried to run but a lightning hit the ground behind him and he flew a few metres and fell down a cliff, the undead thought he got toasted by the lightning but Argor had felt into water, he was unconcious a while and waves took him to land there he woke up, he sneaked back to the bandit camp, wich now was abandond and burnt to the ground, the undead where gone and his parents lied dead a few metres away from the camp as they attempt to flee, Argor grow up in the forest and went hungry some days. When he got to the age 25 he felt strong enough to gear up against the undead. Today hes been looking for the undead but just when he finds them they are finished with theyre raid and dissappears. after 5 years hes been looking for them but now hes thinking on new tactics, if he joins those others who fight the undead he might have a bigger chance to have his revenge.

-Character Age:30

-Character Appearance:he has blonde hair, he has brown eyes and he has a scar over one of them, he wears green clothes, dark grey pants and usually has a hood over his head.

-Character Personality: Hes a good archer and sword duelant.

-Your ambitions: He would like to try joining an human army or something like that to have bigger chances against the undead, he would also like to gaining some money and buy a house where he could settle down if he ever would need to.

-Can your character read or write?:yes.

-Can your character mine?:yes.

-Are you a capable builder?: yes.

-Can you wield a sword?:yes.

-Enjoy Farming?:can farm but does not like to do it.

-Does your character have any special skills?:bow and sword.

-A screenshot of your skin: you can find it Here

-Other Information:Cant say much more

[Neri 3590]

Considering this is your 5th (or 3rd attempt, make your mind up) your layout and proof-reading is sorely lacking.

FIX ALL YOUR HTML TAGS.

I cannot express how ugly they look and how much they shout "I cant be bothered" at the Moderators.

Whatever writing you want in bold, you start with [b.] then end the writing with [/b.]

So this;

[bold tag]Out-Of-Character Name

Will now look like this;

Out-Of-Character Name

Once you've sorted out the layout, we can move on to looking at the actual content.

PS: You may be thinking "What has a application layout got to do with how good I am at RP?"

Well, for one. It shows how much effort you are willing to put into your character and experience as a whole, and secondly, it shows the person's attention to detail, which helps RP immensely.

[NairOG 1]

Considering this is your 5th (or 3rd attempt, make your mind up) your layout and proof-reading is sorely lacking.

FIX ALL YOUR HTML TAGS.

I cannot express how ugly they look and how much they shout "I cant be bothered" at the Moderators.

Whatever writing you want in bold, you start with [b.] then end the writing with [/b.]

So this;

[bold tag]Out-Of-Character Name

Will now look like this;

Out-Of-Character Name

Once you've sorted out the layout, we can move on to looking at the actual content.

PS: You may be thinking "What has a application layout got to do with how good I am at RP?"

Well, for one. It shows how much effort you are willing to put into your character and experience as a whole, and secondly, it shows the person's attention to detail, which helps RP immensely.

What Freya said.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.