[Denied] [Pending] PhoenixGamer36's 2nd Application

[PhoenixGamer36 0]

In-Game Info:

Mc User: PhoenixGamer36

Age: 10

Are you aware this server is PG13?: Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Which rule do you agree with the most?: All of the "Community Conduct" rules.

Are you confused with any rule?: No.

How did you find this server?: I like roleplays and wanted to find a roleplay server.

Definitions:

Roleplaying: Following a role to create some sort of story.

Metagaming: Using your own knowledge instead of your character's knowledge.

Powergaming: Being too over powered in a roleplay.

In-Game Info:

Name: Blitz

Sex: Male

Race: Human

Age: 26

Biography: Doesn't know where he was born or who his parents were. Wonders the realm in search of a village where he can become a knight. Does not want to get in the way of the Deamons and Aenguls. Wants to keep peace and protect with no violence. When young, he was found by a retired knight. He was trained in the art of combat and grew up with combat skills. His trainer died in the Athera worm attack. Has been looking for a job as a guard since then.

Personality/Traits: Resourceful, Kind to passerby, would do anything for a friend, would make a perfect knight, can talk himself out of almost anything.

Strengths: Is a good warrior. Can use a sword and a bow with skill.

Weaknesses: Being forced to fight friends.

Appearance: Dark red hair with red eyes, red white and black outfit, black gloves. http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/red-knight-7129938.png <--- Skin Link

Edited December 14, 2015 by PhoenixGamer36
Re-Doing application. I was denied the first time.

[tilly 5115]

 

Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

 

You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need you make a second post! Just edit it! Be sure to contact me once you make these changes. Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

 

 

[tilly 5115]

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