[Denied] Application

[LeoRabbit 3]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: LeoRabbit99
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule that says you cannot be to OP.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Youtube

 

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: The act of immersing one's self into another character (Real or Fake).
What is metagaming?: The act of using outside knowledge from the real world in a game to gain an unfair advantage. 
What is powergaming?: The act of doing something in the game that you wouldn't be able to do in reality.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Giles
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Half Human, Half Wood-Elf
Character’s age: 23
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
    

   Giles's past is a dreadful story that involves pain and woe from the moment he was created inside his mother womb. It all started when his wood-elvish mother was first pregnant with him.
    When he was in the womb of his mother, a shade seeped into the mother's stomach and possessed the poor child. His human father eventually found out and sought for help. He found a powerful priest who was able to rid the shade possessing Giles. He preformed the ritual that would cleanse Giles's soul however it did not go according to plan. He was purged of the shade but an echo of it's presence lived on in Giles's body changing his personality. During labor, his mother died but he lived. The father fell into a deep state of depression and for all Giles's life, blamed Giles for the death of Giles's mother. Eventually, Giles ran away because of the guilt his father put him through but was found by a human slave trader. For years Giles was put to work until he was bought by another human slave trader who put Giles into children fighting rings for people's entertainment. He quickly learned the ways of battle becoming a skilled bowman and a decent swordsman. He was a cunning fighter who used his agility to his advantage. He then became to old to fight at 13 in the children arenas and was put into a human orphanage. He faced a troublesome life there where he not only faced physical and emotional abuse among the "Care Takers", but also faced racism from the other orphans due to his half elvish side. He was beaten over and over again even though he always fought back. One day however-, he got the upper hand and killed another orphan with a rock. The moment he did that, he ran away once again and never looked back. After that he made a living for himself by stealing food and living on the streets, barley surviving.

   Now, he adventures the world showing evil no mercy to seek closure for his long and harsh childhood.

 

Personality Traits: Secretive, Paranoid, Dedicated, Sinister to the Evil
Ambitions: To purge the world of corruption.
Strengths/Talents: Archery, Swords, Agile, Sneaky, Perceptive
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Losses control easily (Due to his harsh upbringing)
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):
130LB
5' 10'
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Your character cannot have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request. This refers to this shade possession. Regardless as to whether you have it anymore, this cannot feature in your biography. Being possessed by a shade can only be done on the server.

Please fill in your strengths and skills realistically.

Please fill in your weaknesses and inabilities to compensate your strengths and skills.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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