[Denied] [Pending] App

[Eliminator322 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Eliminator322
How old are you?:12
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Cyber Bulling
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:YouTube

What is roleplaying?:Having a Fake role in a game or comunity
What is metagaming?:A sway of playing a game were the things around your affect your game
What is powergaming?: A way of interacting with games such as roleplay while workingtowards a goal

Character’s name: Can i have sumething simple such as Eli other wise i would prefer to have someone make it for me
Character’s sex:Male
Character’s race:Elf
Character’s age:28
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Personality Traits:Kind to those who do not anger him in any way/Selfish,Always wants to keep loot from battles and does not offer gifts to people/Easily angered to those who are not kind of him.Will slay a foe without sorrow or forgiveness
Ambitions:Become an amazing Archer
Strengths/Talents:Fairly skilled with bow
Weaknesses/Inabilities:Left Eye and Arm were injured in the battles./Left Eye:Slightly Blurry/Left Arm:Weaker than right can't use for long periods of time
Appearance: Height 6"2 Weight 128 Pounds
Skin:Blue Archer Elf
Bio:In a town that worshiped the father of the Elves of Aegis. Malin. Was part in a small battle for his town and lost. The village was raided then captured the following day all that remained were slave but Eli managed to escape. On a long journey to the closest Elven town. As he reached the tow after 2 days he started to train with his bow and became one of the most valuable archers in his new village.
     Moths pass by as he trains even more. The village praises him they rewarded him with a bow that the village spent months perfecting for him. The next night the village was attacked but he and a few other villagers defended and won. During the end of the battle he ran away to the forest and stared there for a week. Then he headed to the city of Vailor and found out he was only better than a few arches there so he learned from the best. As the days passed the skies grew dark and thunder rumbled in the distance as the archons awake. The cites fear what would happen. So they send out some of there best archers to travel to many realms to find the source of this terror. Eli follows behind but, his adventure only starts there.

Edited December 17, 2015 by Eliminator322
Pending

[Imi 425]

Under review.

[Imi 425]

Pending:
-Your app has been put on pending for the following reasons:

-Your meta gaming and power gaming definitions were incorrect. Try googling the answers then make the required changes.
-You didn't provide a skin. Take a screenshot of your skin and insert it in the post, or link it to us!
-Your bio is very cliched. Make sure to try and make it original, and you will be more likely to be accepted. For example,the "best archer in the village" is a cliched event.
-Your backstory only contained one piece of lore. You need at least three pieces of server lore to be accepted. Feel free to browse the LOTC wiki to get some more basic server info. I'll link it below.
http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
-You have 24 hours to make these changes.  Feel free to contact me if you need any help or have any questions. Good luck!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

• This was a slight slip up on our side, sorry for getting your hopes up.
• You have had three applications prior to this which were all denied and were posted in succession of each other with no more than an hour gap. You have been warned of this and doing so again within 24 hours of the original denied application (which was roughly 22 hours ago) will result in a ban from applying. 

Please re-apply when the original AT member specified. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.