[Denied] Baz's Falcon Application

[Baz's Falcon 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Sherlock1337CS

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber-Bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Doing what ever you can do in real life just by role playing it in a realistic way as long as it doesn't break any rule. 

What is metagaming?: Mixing OOC chat and info into IC chat and IC to OOC.

What is powergaming?: Forcing unrealistic actions against other players.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Edward Hood

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I'm coming from Felesen, and raised with my best man ,my brother Peter. We were raised in a orphanage, by bad people that always beat and hurt us. One day, when I was 14 and my brother 15, we decided to ran away from this place. We took as many food as we could and escaped in the night. We didn't had money, or better clothes, then we started to steal wallets, money, food and clothes. We realised that we really good at stealing, and we started to steal more expensive items, like Jewelry,gold and rings.
 
One morning, when we sleept at a abandoned house, near Felesen, my brother didn't get up on his feet his face were pale and he was very white, I understood he was sick, I dragged him, and we walked to the hospital. The doctors told me that my brother have a Plague and he is going to die. I saw my brother for the last time, some weeks later, He had some blood on his mouth, his face were full of green dots. After my brother died, and the money for the doctors and some expensive medicines, I lost alot of money, and most of our items were dirty and probably touched with Peter then I throw them. Today, I want to join a thives guild, to keep my and my brother's job.

Personality Traits: Edward is a good man, But when people annoy him he is being violent

Ambitions: Edward wants  to be a great hunter, He also wants to be a great warrior 

Strengths/Talents: Edward is good bow shooter and really friendly, He can make everyone laugh with his jokes though sometimes they are too racist.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Edward weakness is being underground for too long, As he has nightmares about mines and being too high, It might be too cold and dangerous.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Edward height is: 187cm long and his weight is 67kilo, He has light blue eyes, Brown hair and normal body figure.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/hunter-6841956.png

[Keldrith 717]

Denied

You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions feel free to PM me on the forums and I will get back to you Asap! Please wait a full 24 hours before reapplying and Merry Krugsmas.

 

- Your roleplaying definition is incorrect, refer to the following link for revision.

 

- Your metagaming definition is incorrect, please refer to the following link for revision.

 

- Your powergaming definition is slightly incorrect, please use this link to revise your definitions! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying
 

- Your biography has little server lore, please use this link to research some more! And with how old your character is, it is unlikely that he would actually catch the plague, as that was something that happened in The Fringe, and the more recent one only happened to void magic users.

 http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor

 

- Your strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced, please revise these. 

 

[Keldrith 717]

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