crecentmoon1018 0 Share Posted December 27, 2015 What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: crecent_moon1018 How old are you?:12 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes What’s the rule you agree with the most? The rule that I agree with says, "Derogatory remarks directed toward those on Lord of the Craft mediums of communication will not be tolerated. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No I under stand all of the rules. How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking to find a roleplay sever to play on and I stumped on the lord of the craft. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?: well I thank that it is were you have fun with your friend. secondly I thank it is were you git a group of people to gather and everyone plays a part like you could be the hero, the villein or sidekick. It is like were you are playing house and everyone is something. What is metagaming?: It is were you using outside knowledge whit in a game. What is powergaming?: It is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie I thank. In-Character Information Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: Cress Character’s sex: female Character’s race: Elf Character’s age: 12 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Cress lived in a small village named Phoenix Drop her mom name is Lucy and her dads name is natsu her mom came from a rich family the Heartfilia and natus her dad was a servant lucy mom and dad did not approve of there wedding so after a few yeas they lit the house in flames. When cress came home all she found was her grandparents they did not know that they had a child if they did they would of let there doter live. Out of there guilt they broth cress back with them. She never find out the true till she was 8. (she was 5 at the time of the die of her parents) She ran away in to the city. A few days later home less people try to tack her money but she mange to git away. After that she stared to live on the streets. 2 yeas later she was in a gang the would kill people for a living trying to live. One day a old man fond her hiding in a alley he let her say ta his home for a few yeas so she can git a better life. Her grandparent found the old mans house and her stuff in it and accused his of stealing cress so they order for him to be hung. she has been run from them until this day hopping they would not find her. ( her demon eye has nothing to do with her back ground so I did not tell about it) Personality Traits: Love sports, very kind and has a loving hart. She love singing. She love to be out at night because she loves the moon and She love flowers too. Ambitions: She has hated to see people cry so she wants to have a place were no one cry on one sad no one gits hurt so she sets out to try to help other. Strengths/Talents: She has a good singing voice, She gits power from the moon. She can see in to the future of a person life by looking into there eyes. (The future thing is because of her demon eye) Weaknesses/Inabilities: The smell of blood make her go crazy to were she can not think and if she gits to rap up in the vision in to the future she can die. last but not lest if black mage tucks her she will for ever gone not like gone gone but never to see the sun light ever a gin so she will be put in to ethanol sleep. Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): my height is 5ft 2in and weight is 80 pounds. Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Greener 687 Share Posted December 28, 2015 You have been denied for the reasons below! You have plagairzed your powergaming definitions from the first thing on google search. Don't do this again or face a ban. Your metagaming definition needs to be expanded and I see what you mean with your roleplaying definition buts its just wishy washy please try and edit it. If you need help check here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but do not copy You need to include server lore in your biography such as towns and events. Check the wiki for some help Biography is also very hard to read because of grammar mistakes and spelling but the second paragraph is everywhere. First your in a gang and then on the street. To be honest it doesn't make sense. Please try and come up with something else and stick to that one thing perhaps, this is only advice. Your skin does not suit the server. You do not get power from the moon. No demon eye. Change the entirety of your weaknesses none of it relate to back story. You may reapply 24 hours of the time of denial! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greener 687 Share Posted December 28, 2015 Moved to Denied Application Forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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