[Denied] camblycreeper's whitelist application

[camblycreeper 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: camblycreeper

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: To have separate chat to have OOC so the chat is not spammed with OOC stuff

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Very complicated combat

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was searching a list of servers (FACTIONS THIS! SKYBLOCK THAT!) when this server caught my eye and thought "hmm, seems nice"

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To enter the body and mind of a character within the confines ones own mind, eg: to become a character in your own mind

 What is metagaming?: To have a game outside of a games own environment 

What is powergaming?: To have excluded various things in a game to make way toward goal at maximum progress 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Camblycreeper Van-Creep

Character’s sex: male... to a mechanical extent

Character’s race: Creeper

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

When i was but five years of age, My kind went to war with a mysterious enemy that had a pale fog follow them shrouding their faces, they seemed bony and stiff... I survived hiding under a sheet of metal. When the war was over I emerged to find blood and gore, the worst of it all my parents left to lie cold against a stone, together for eternity all I could do was hug them in hopes they would awaken... After about two days a friendly mage,by the name of Carlos saw me roaming the chaos that befallen my siblings, the look of a sad child of any race or species made him unhappy and could never see a child cry without trying to help, and so took me in.

 

By the age of fourteen i was assigned as a helper in an academy that Carlos owned. As an experiment one day, they wanted to see if a creeper could withstand more electricity than lightning, turned out they could... kind of... I exploded but most of my brain was still alive, so Carlos fled to the dwarven city to seek help, they said they could build a suit to contain my living parts if he paid five thousand gold, he did so and they built the suit in one week whist I was being kept alive by the healers of the academy as best they could, Carlos dragged the suit all the way to the academy as fast as he could. He said the dwarves made the suit light as a leaf in the wind, yet strong as an ox.

when I turned eighteen I left the academy, every night tho, i hear my brothers and sisters speak to me in the wind... I run from both cats and my past... two thing s that I can never forget

 Personality Traits: hates cats, not particularly good with girls, neutral, short temper, sad past, intelligent, polite and decent.

Ambitions: build a fine faction of friendly people who accept me as a creeper

Strengths/Talents: smart engineer, good at construction, decent farmer, decent miner, decent climber.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: cats and parkour.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): metal furnace suit in the size and shape of a man, with a creepers face on it, about 1 kg in weight and about 1.77 Meters in height.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin http://i.imgur.com/PLiI12o.png[/img]

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your defintions are not fully correct. Please work on them a bit more. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Please choose one of the common races for a starting application. (Human, Dwarf, Orc, Elf)
• Your name doesn't really fit our servers theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.
• Your biography has no server lore in it. Could you please update your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Magical lightweight suits that are extra tough are not really canon in LotC universe.
• Please add more to your ambitions.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.
• Your skin does not match our servers theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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