[Denied] [Pending]{Ryden's Application} Aiver Christine

[Aiver 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? ~ RydenChristine

How old are you? ~ 19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 ~ Aye

Have you read and agreed to the rules?~ Aye

What’s the rule you agree with the most?~ A rule I personally agree with automatically once I read it, is the rule that forbids abusive and foul language of any way.
Simply because we are cultured and moral people, and so we must behave as such.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?~ Nay

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? ~ Skimming through a random server list till I saw "Roleplay", the rest is history.

 

Definitions~

 

What is roleplaying?~ A story created, ran and maintained by multiple "writers", each taking on a different role, creating the "Whole".

What is metagaming?~ Roleplaying according to "real life" knowledge which wasn't achieved in the story.

What is powergaming?~ Roleplay style in which a writer takers control of another's character, or alternatively writes/assumed things which leave the partner helpless and unable to execute any action.
Often seen foul and unsportsmanlike.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Aiver Christine

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography ~
Aiver Christine; a human born to independence.

Amidst flames and ashes, at 1923 Aiver was born in Felsen to a peasant family of farmers.
He was raised and educated by his parents Vincent and Camilia, who ironically were unaplhabetic and lacking of knowledge.
Aiver was taught farming of the lowest of levels, some little home crafting and gathering alongside shallow lessons of humanity and behaviour in society.

After 15 years of darkness, which he eventually realized as darkness, Aiver throws a facade and tell his parents that he doesn't love them, he tells blames them for feeding him lies and foolish views about life when there is so much more out there.
This event follows Aiver's eccentric and curious nature. The combination of the two causes Aiver to reach out for rumours and shortly after take extreme and odd actions in response.

The folding of events were the goal for Aiver for as long as he remembers, "If i'd go there today, where would I find myself tomorrow?, and if i'd take an action here, how would it affect him there?", that is a common formula in Aiver's mind.

Realizing there's a lot more to the world and what is achievable, Aiver meets his inevitable fate; independence. Slipping through his parent's greasy and dirty hands to wide space of clarity and luminosity.
Aiver is condemned to find himself on his own; create his own path and learn all he knew anew. 
Four years since he is a free youth, and yet not much achieved.

Hardly has a shelter, Aiver fails himself everyday by producing much less than the energy and time he burns. 

Tired of his unsuccessful route, Aiver decides to go out and study. But to do that, he needs to go out and find someone who's willing to teach him.
To teach him what? Doesn't matter, everything is still open, and world is full of opportunities

 

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Personality Traits: Eccentric, Curious, Easily motivated and Dynamic

Ambitions: Non particular, wants to reach as much as he can, to see more, to know more and to try more.

Strengths/Talents: Has a sharp eye for geometry; naturally can calculate distances, speed, size, weight and their impact on physical collision outcome.
Has a sharp nose.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hearing ability is slightly worse than the average. Sometimes socially awkward. 

Appearance~ Weight; 63kg ~  Height; 1.75 Meters

Visual Appearance~ 

http://imgur.com/pROfnYz

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Good job on the app! However, some changes need to be made:

• Except the mentioning of Felsen, no other lore is used. Please add more server lore to your biography. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• You don't really talk about things that happened to you as much as you talk about your characters view on life. Could you add one more paragraph about your journeys and the events that happened to you?
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them. (A sharp nose is more of appearance trait than a strength)

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make needed changes in the set time period.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

 

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.