[Denied] [Pending] RaivynMC app

[HardMetal11 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:RaivynMC (Last name is HardMetal11(I keep thinking it is that!))

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:You may only apply as an approved race and subrace: Elf, Human, Orc, Halfling, Dwarf, and Kharajyr.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Just looking for rp servers.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Acting 

What is metagaming?:Going beyond limits.

What is powergaming?:Maximising to a goal

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Raivyn

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:39

Biography: Used to be in a peaceful village until it was destroyed. His mother and father died in the fire. Raivyn took all he could and ran. He has been running for 20 years. Ravangers found him and raised him. Knights found them all and took them to a village. The knights trained Raivyn. Then the rest of the the story must begin.

Personality Traits:Nice and Brave

Ambitions:Bring peace to the world

Strengths/Talents:Strong and quick reflexes

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Long range or change of weapons.

Appearance:Chain armour and a big celestial bronze sword.

Edited January 16, 2016 by HardMetal11
Name

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your defintions are vague. Please expand on them. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Your application is quite short, frankly. The usual size is two medium paragraphs. Would you kindly expand it?
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your current story seems like a cliche (the whole dead parents thing). Could you please work on it more?
• You're missing personality traits. This helps build our your character!
• Please add more to your ambitions.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.
• Could you please add your skin?

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.