[Denied] [Pending] Application

[Lady Jaed 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: xJaed

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am very aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No powergaming or metagaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for good medieval role-play servers on YouTube when I found this and decided to check it out. It seemed pretty awesome and well… Here I am!

What is roleplaying?: Acting out a part of a specific role

What is metagaming?: (Can I use an example?) If you do on a different character something and then something bad happens, you take that knowledge and avoid doing that on your other character.

What is powergaming?: (Another example) For instance, if someone says something like, *ties Chario up with rope, you can't just go *Unties rope and runs.

Character’s name: Chario (Kah-ree-oh)

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18 1/2

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): No one knows Chario's birthdate or who her real parents were except her. She was found and adopted by an old heartlander couple (who lived in Felsen) at age four. The couple died and Chario ran away. For a time, she became a bandit because there were no open, good paying  jobs in the area. She was caught in the act of thievery and taken to jail, only to escape a couple days later. She hung around King's Road- a good ways away from any town and killed any merchants or travellers who might be passing and looted them. She became very skilled at sneaking around very populated areas and silently picking people off, one by one (You might've noticed she's more like an assassin). She stopped being a bandit for a while, and most people forgot about her and wiped her off most wanted lists. She is very quiet and mysterious but can be harsh when she wants to. She is no longer a bandit but most people don't like sticking around her because, well, let's be honest. She was a bandit. She's not "bad" but not to "good" either.

Personality Traits: She is very sercretive and hates talking about her past. She's basically a badass when she wants to be and can be a little clumsy at times. Chario is neutral and spends most of her time in solitude.

Ambitions: None, really. ((She just wants to be noticed by senpai <3 lol no)) She wants to forget her past and get friends, have a family or  become a loyal assassin.

Strengths/Talents: She is very stealthy and is pretty flexible. She can also jump pretty high compared to a normal human's jump hight.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She hates when people help her or when she isn't able to do the best on her first try.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):She is 5 ft. 3 in. (1.60 m.) with a weight of 125 lb.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

 

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

-Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are mixed up.

-More server lore must be included within your biography.

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Your skin can not have so many hair colors.

-The Kings Road was on our first map, about 400 years ago RPly.

-More server lore must be included. Generally speaking three pieces is the minimum.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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