application [Denied] Joe Application to server

[Joe__ 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Joe__ (that is 2 underscores by the way)

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Of course, (there were a lot)

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Dont start stupid wars just because your bored.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Im good.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Minecraft fourms

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: When you act as a character than you have made up

What is metagaming?: Using to game to do more than it was intended to (example being you making a roleplay when minecraft is a sandbox game)

What is powergaming?: Being that one kid on the playground when your playing make-believe and then the kid yells "NO I DODGED IT!!!" yeah I dont like that kid, dont be that kid.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Joe

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human-HighLander

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I was born a human highlander, I was born at the time of the trip away from thales, my parents lost me and could not find me until it was time to leave.. I was left at thales and grew up in the wild. I had learned of the people who had left through stories of books I had found. I learned to defend myself and I had found I was very good at using a bow and arrow. I found a heated spring that could keep me warm and was able to grow some crops to sustain me. But as I grew I needed more food and new I had to set out to find a new land. I found a abandoned boat that was never used to escape thales and I used that boat to sail out to find people, to find a new home. (sorry its not 2 paragraphs this is my 1st time making a roleplay thing) 

Personality Traits: Ready to fight and learn from the people around me

Ambitions: To be stronger and better everyday, to help those in need. To also learn how to use magic.

Strengths/Talents: Has good will power and wont quit from a fight.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Doesn't know when to quit, and trusts to much.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6 feet 160 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

 

 

 

I just wanted to say I know my application may not be the greatest but I put a lot of work into it, I hope I can be accepted and not put on pending because frankly Im not even done with my 1st go at getting accepted. Thank you.  

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

 

(1)

Your metagaming definition is incorrect, please correct it using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

(2)

Your powergaming definition, albeit I know what you're saying could do with a bit more clarification. Use the link above to get a good idea of what should be written.

 

(3)

That time period you reference to was a time when your character would not be alive. Please use more recent Server Lore for your application.

 

Your character is too young to have experienced Thales, it's been over 100 In Rp years. Your character would have been born in the land of Vailor.

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

(4)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

 

 

You can re apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.