[Denied] Application For Cokerguy123

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Cokerguy123

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I am a bit confused about how the wars work, but I will learn on the way

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was wanting to play on an rp server that i can relate with, so when I found this one (me being a very big lotr fan) I immediately wanted to play.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you create a character and roleplay with it, abiding all the lore rules, and such

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when someone creates or does something that is not in the universe, such as creating elaborate redstone contraptions and such.

What is powergaming?: its when someone, or the entire server is based around, or has a specific goal, such as story, and atmosphere (I had to copy the ex. I hope that is ok)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Galilean Greenleaf

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): As being born a wood elf, Galilean was brought up to be a peaceful lad, sadly to his parents he was a bit of a different elf. as a child he was always a bit rougher, he would spend long days in the woods. No one except him knew what he did but he always was able to bring back dinner for the family. His father taught him the ways of the bow and of the trees, his mother taught him etiquette, and many songs of old. When he was 16 he got in a fight with traveler, he won. but at the coast of his family name, he was exiled out of his village and was never to come back, he also decided to change his last name, from Strongbow, to Greenleaf. After that experience he decided that he must calm himself down and try to learn new ways, in other words he traveled to Haelun'or, to learn the High Elf ways and get a good education. after that he decided to return home, by that time he was only 18. here we come to the present, and here is where things get interesting. (I don't know if that whole scenario is ok, but I hope so)

Personality Traits:Calm, Considerate, Kind, Hesitant

Ambitions: To become either a strong warrior, and excel in military so no one will be hurt again. Or to gain enough money to live a long and peaceful life. (I know, to completely different things, but since this is my first time, I just want to see how this goes.)

Strengths/Talents: As being a wood elf, he is very good with a bow, and has some knowledge on swordplay.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: No experience in riding a horse

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  Height: 5,6 Weight: 163.2 Pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Your biography must be expanded on.

-Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect.

-A Wood Elf would not be able to gain an education in Haelun'or.

-Your weaknesses must be expanded on.

-A Wood Elf has darker, tanned skin color.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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