[Denied] Monzón III's Application

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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MonzaaMC
How old are you?: I'm 14 years old
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, and I agree
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "The abuse of glitches or any exploits are not tolerated"
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No thanks
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found this server with awesome mecanics on Google
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Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a style of game that comes from the word RPG, players must live game situations getting into the skin of the character they represent, and live many adventures with their virtual friends
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is the use of out of character (OOC) information to use to your advantage.
Just because you see someone’s name tag in your house does not mean you know
they are inside in character. You and your character see different things.
What is powergaming?: For example it is when a player falls from the roof of a house, it would break, but the player suffers nothing doing Powergaming
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In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Monzón III    
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Elf
Character’s age: 14
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------My name is I have a great heritage, for my grandfather, Monzón I was a noble knight who emerged victorious from the Crusades and returned in triumph to his empire, unfortunately, soon after he fell into the black death, leaving Monzón II charge of his empire, supplied large cities and founded many others, when he decided to leave the earthly life left by his son, Monzón III, or also known as Monzaa after this long and mythical heritage many things have happened: have fallen empires , walls collapsed, rolled heads and many souls went to hell; fortunately, Monzón III was present before the elves, guide you on your way and take the glory.

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Personality Traits: Brown Hair, Thin (no fat), Adventure Clothes
Ambitions: Monzón III loves drink the medieval beer!
Strengths/Talents: Monzón III have awesome skills with the Sword and he can do frenetic attacks with much speed
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Monzón III has a weakness for the stealthy attacks, impatient for the attack
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): The height is 1,70 and weight is 58kg
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

I can not send any photos, I skip this error: "YOU ARE ONLY AT UPLOAD 184.32KB" if you need my skin can look in mcskinsearch.com/MonzaaMC
Sorry Moderators / Admins

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-You have plagiarized definitions. This is a serious offense on LOTC, and doing so once more will result in being banned from applying.

-Your character can not come from a noble/powerful heritage without it first existing through roleplay, and having permission to play the character OOCly.

-More lore must be included in the biography.

-Expand on both the ambitions and weaknesses.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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