[Denied] Mr_Chapi´s application

[Mr_Chapi 1]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Mr_Chapi

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The prohibition of spreading personal information. Everyone shouldn´t go out of his character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I read them carefully

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Looking in google for a good RP server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is acting like another person. This includes the character´s personality, the way of thinking...

What is metagaming?: When someone is roleplaying and he acts as if his character knew things that he shouldn´t know(things about other characters, for example) because the person who is acting knows them.

What is powergaming?: Its when someone roleplaying just want to get more power and doesn´t care about other facts.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ragnur Iumas Ulfroc

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Ragnur Iumas Ulfroc was born the last of seven brothers. His father abandoned him in an old street in Felsen, where an old man found him and took care of him as if he was his son. Although the old man saved him, Ragnur didnt had a good childhood. He and the old man lived in the streets, and Ragnur had to steal to survive.

 

Time passed and the old man got ill and died. Ragnur had to continue alone. His way of life didnt changed at all, but he became a different man. He never talked to anyone, but almost all beggars in the city knew him. Ragnur also find some atraction in sword fighting. He used to practice with sticks, and developed some abilities, enough to survive in a fight.

 

Personality Traits:

   Serious, just talk when he has to do it.

   Non-religious. He thinks that no one can help him, except for himself.

Ambitions: Try to get a better way of life.

Strengths/Talents: He has suffered, so little things can harm him

                                  He knows how to survive in bad conditions

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is young and has no experience

                                            Any mention of his family shocks him.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight)

 He is 71 inches and 132 pounds. He wears a dirty white shirt with some kind of dark green jacket and a hood, which covers most of his head, although some brown hair is visible. He also has dirty, dark green pants with brown boots.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your power-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is... rather cliche. Just having a character's parents abandon him for literally no reason and than being raised by a random hermit.

 

-You need to balance your character's strengths and weaknesses.

 

-Your characters weakness of 'being shocked by mention of family' makes little sense. Was he not abandoned when he was extremely young? How is being shocked a weakness?

 

-You failed to include a minecraft skin of your character.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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