[Denied] emmxbrown's Application form.

[emmxbrown 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: My account name is emmxbrown.

How old are you?: I am 12 years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13?: I am aware that the server is PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have, and double-checked to make sure I got them all right.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: To maintain respect while interacting with other players. Be a builder of this community, not a hinderance or detriment.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No, I completely agree with all of your rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was watching Gizzy Gazza's latest video, and thought your server seemed like a server I had been searching for for a while. In my opinion, I really wish I had found your server sooner, as it is a great idea.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is to act out the specific part of a different person or character.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is an action where a person's character makes use of knowledge that the person is aware of but the character is not.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems which is usually video-games, board games and role-playing games.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Valencia

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 21

Biography: When Valencia was young, she lived her life as a human. She was born as a "human", and did as her siblings did. To her parents, she seemed just like them, until it came to a time where they started to question her. Questions like: Why did she have pointy ears? Why did she have much paler skin than them? Why did she look so peculiar? Soon, they realised she was not human. She was different, but they did not know what she was. At the age of 7, they sent her away. They sent her on a long, adventurous journey to no-where. After a week of almost dying, a group of elves travelling around found her. They instantly knew she was lost, and invited her to stay with them.

Valencia learned the ways of fighting, foraging, and the lifestyle of an elf. She was always a favourite to those elves. However,  it came a time where she needed to do things on her own. Learn what it was like to be an individual, not just part of a random group. She learnt what/whom to trust, and what not to trust.

Personality Traits: Brave, Kind, Loving, Strong, Adventurous, Fearless, and Caring.

Ambitions: To defeat the evil of the world.

Strengths/Talents: Accuracy with a bow, fighting evil.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Seeing families happy together.

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[WuHanXianShi14 0]

Under Review!

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

Unfortunately I have to DENY your application, here's why:

• Your powergaming definition is wrong. You can browse our wiki (link above) to get a better hint on what you should write there.
• Your bio should include some server lore. Try including what city your elf character grew up in (there's also a list of human cities in our wiki)
• Your ambitions are kind of broad. Give me something more specific like "wants to become a druid" or "wants to become a good swordsman"
• Your weakness isn't really a weakness. What hinders your character? what things is she BAD at doing?

You may apply again in 12 hours. Rewrite your application and post it again if you want to try again. Thank you

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

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