[Denied] My character: Lila

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Lila_rose

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i was watching a video of Gizzy Gazza about this server

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:playing as your own character in a story line

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is a mix of OOC and IC. OOC is out of character thats when you want to have plain fun, grind on NPC's and all that stuff. IC is In Character thats when you start roleplaying. so if my real name is Lilarose and my RP name is Lila. if they call me Lilaroos its metagaming

What is powergaming?: powergaming is forcing actions against another player. as so if in real life you would not instantly kill someone take their money and walk away. so you dont do that in role play

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Lila

Character’s seks:Female

Character’s race:Elf

Character’s age:124

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Lila's father was a guard on middle Asulon but he broke his arm when another guard that didn't like him much attackt him, but the people liked the other guard so he tricked the others to hate her father. and so they wanted him to go. he traveled until he arrived at a lake in Anthos. he sat down and there he saw a beautifal women who was hunting, Lila's mother. the poeple of Anthos never accepted Lila's father becouse he stopt with his job as guard they didn't believe the only reason was that he broke his arm so they moved in to the forest and there Lila and her brother were born. there parents learned her brother everything about hunting, they didn't wanted Lila to know things about hunting cause it's to dangerous. but at night when there parents were asleep her brother learned her everything she needed to know about hunting. but then on a hunting trip er family got killed by a group of wild bears. Lila was home alone cause her brother told her to stay. after a long time of waiting she decided to search for her family, and then she saw her family lying on the ground coverd in blood she cryed herself asleep. when she woke up she decided to travel far away from the place where her family got killed. she was Always alone never trusted any one and never stayed more then two days at the same place. but one time she met a guy his name was Tarian he was a jong elf three years older then her beautifal blue eyes and brown hair. he looked trustworthy, he radiated security and confidence. she decided to stay with him. he impressed her he never was scared and was Always there when she needed him. they stayed 7 years with each other, they were thinking about getting married and having children. but again took a hunting trip him off her, but this time it was not an animal who killed him but a man, the man was shocked he did not intend to kill him but she was blind of anger she killed him with her bow without any mercy. she screamed and cryed by the dead body of her friend but what happend next broke her hart. she saw a women with her child standing there staring at the dead body of the man the woman begon to scream at her awful words You may be cursed! Go away and never come back! die! the way my man died! she ran away her eyes filled with tears she took a life of a man with a family now they didn't had a father any more just like her. and still she travels alone never trusting any one, but somewhere she miss the feeling of friendship or family but she didn't find it she is still seeking for a place where she can make friends and leave her past behind

Personality Traits:Brave and Fast

Ambitions:Finding friends and finaly have a family

Strengths/Talents:Hunting and sneaking around

Weaknesses/Inabilities:swimming she never liked swimming so she is not very good at it

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): she has long brown hair and blue eyes.a little nose and soft lips. she is 1.78 long and her weight is 72k

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7406077/bananasome-fight-girl/

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-You need more server lore in your biography.

-Please include more weaknesses.

-That skin is not the most lore appropriate.

-The biography needs to be more about your character and what made your character how they are now.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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