[Denied] Application

[Jinju 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

How old are you?: im 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yea im aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes u did :D

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: that Troll is legit xD

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I Didint understand the OOC (why there is OOC, what does that meen)

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i very like Roleplay and its very hard to find good roleplay server. so im trying to find one a week. i apply to everyone untill i will find a good one :D

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: its to become a chatacter and think like him behave like him and play like him :)

What is metagaming?: to get thinks or think out of the character. (to be aware from somthing the character is not) (get knowledge from dead chatacters or from the player)  

What is powergaming?: (not sure) to do somthing ur not realy able to.( you cant kill somone if he has a armour )

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Jinju (its not my real name xD)

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: my anti Virus is not letting me to go in the Wiki DX so i dont know about the races. if i will know i will choose a race that has speed and jump. that has attacks of being quickly.

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): "You Askin What is my Story ! so srsly i dont very know everything but alot of people told me so... lets start ;D my father fighted at a war. very hard war he was not able to fight and have a son. so he sent me to a village. at the village i grew up. Sarn and Megoni where like mom and dad for me. and... i had friends to ! (Ben  Alon and Genshu) one day a war started i was 17 i went to fight with my friends and... the other warriors where stronger ! i told my friends: Lets go back to village ! we will lose !. alon  and ben came with me but.... Genshu stll fighted he said its better to die and not lose this war. he was so good ! he used all his powers he killed 10 warriors and our side was stornger from them so me and my friends came back to attack. at the way we saw Genshu.... he sayd.. i love u. and he died.  We Won the war but we felt like we lost. its hard to come back to the village and tell Genshu parents he died. after that i started to work as a farmer. good buisness :D now im 21 and im going to go to a atventure. the buggest atventure i can ever have ! To Find My Parents"

Personality Traits: i.... like famin! helps me to relaxe and think. im nice freindly i like to help people. yea somtimes im angry people says its because i dont have a mother and father but.. i think i born like that

Ambitions: i wanna be a big farmer ! sell alot but not for the money... its just fun ! and i want to find my father and mother. i beliave i will !

Strengths/Talents: Good at Speed, Think fast, i think alot before attacking.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: somtimes and too angry i dont think well.... and im very not good at PVP (without bow/somthing else then sword)

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): im 1.80 Meters i like alot Blue and Yellow color. i always go with a hat. Green eyes black hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Harri 4815]

You've been denied.

 

• 'Troll is legit xD' isn't a rule on the server. Can you specify what you mean?
• OOC stands for Out of Character, it's a basic concept that needs to be grasped before playing here.
• Your meta-gaming definition is extremely unclear/wrong. Re-do it next time.
• Your power-gaming definition is wrong. If you're not sure, read about it next time before applying.
• You need to select an actual race - not just the one that attacks fast and is fast and is jump xD. 
• You really need to try and get on the wiki to read about races etc - If not, I doubt you'll have any chance of getting onto the server.
• Why would your character not know about his own story? It doesn't make much sense.
• Since you used speech marks, your character would be assumed to be speaking - ;D isn't a word that people normally say.
• There have been many wars here on LoTC - use an actual one rather than just saying 'a war'. It's a good way to work Lore into your bio.
• Try list the name of the village your Jinju was sent to - once more, it's a good way to work lore in.
• What war was this second one? Try name one for the same reason as above.
• How did Genshu defeat ten enemies alone, when they were stronger? It's rather unrealistic.
• PvP isn't an in-character aspect - your character wouldn't be good or bad at it since it doesn't exist.
• Your skin isn't suitable - I don't even know what it's meant to be. Try pick one that fits with your chosen race. 
• Your bio is extremely poor in punctuation/grammar/spelling. Whether that be pure laziness or perhaps English being a second language, I do not know, but this server focusses mainly on English as the main form of communicating, and doing it to a high tier. Try fix this next time.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Harri 4815]

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