[Denied] My Application

[TheBroLord 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: BennyBro

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes and I'm cool with that

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about  no cyber bullying where it'll not be tolerated! I hate bullying on it's own so yeah...

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No not really

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube, GizzyGazza's channel

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act a role in a sort of play or roleplaying game like this one.

What is metagaming?: A strategy used in a game that transcends a ruleset

What is powergaming? : A sort of  interacting with a game or game system.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alexion Zayn

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Born in a forest, my mother was killed when I was 2 and my father helped to raise me. I don't know much about my mother but I know she fought against evil with my father, she was a great women. But back to me, I trained to be my father, but he sadly was killed by a mysterious person when I was 12, and so on a wizard trained me! He sacrificed his life for mine when a dragon attacked him and I. I was able to defeat the beast. And from then on, I swore to stop all evil in my way! I will help the poor and the innocent! I like training, animals, protecting the good and going on adventures! I hate evil, dark forces and the dark itself cause of that dragon which also shot purple/black fire which is called shadow fire! I will defeat all evil! I am Alexion The Mage and I will strike fear into evil's soul's!

 

Personality Traits: Friendly, Athletic, Brave, Intelligent and Helpful

Ambitions: Help all good and stop all evil!

Strengths/Talents: Stealth, Speed, Battling with a bow and arrow.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Shadow fire cause it gives me bad memories and I can't help but remember my annoying past!

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Weight: 250 lb. Height: 2 M. Fears: Shadow fire cause well... I already said! Also giant sea dragons cause I can't stand the blue fire which is shadow fire but blue and the wizard who raised me had a blue robe!

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your roleplaying definition is vague. Please expand upon this. Look at the link below for help with this but remember to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

 

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are plagiarised and incorrect. If you are seen plagiarising again, it will result in a ban from applying. Look at the links below for some help in writing the definitions but remember to put them into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Powergaming

 

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand it and make it two decent sized paragraphs.

 

• Your biography contains no server lore. Please add some in. Look at the link below for some help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• Dragons are very rare in LotC and a 12 year old would not have been able to defeat one. 

 

• There is no such thing as shadow fire.

 

• Your character cannot know magic already and therefore you cannot be a mage.

 

• Defeating all evil is a cliche that is used often. Please change this.

 

• Think of a better ambition for your character. As said above, stop all evil is cliche.

 

• Think of some other weaknesses as shadow fire does not exist.

 

• Once again, shadow fire does not exist so there is not a blue version of it.

 

• Your skin is not suitable for the server. Please find another one that looks like your character, in your case, a human.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

 

 

 

[Chamosial 379]

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