[Denied] Graggorg the Breaker

[Sotiris The Fallen Savior 0]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

 

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Steve2262

How old are you?: 20

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Could you clear up the villainous behavior rules in your response? I intend to play a villainous Orc, and would like to know what I’m doing when I inevitably commit crimes.  

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From Caelria

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting in such a way as to be in line with your selected character.

What is metagaming?: Using information that your character wouldn’t have access to.

What is powergaming?: Trying to do something that is beyond your character.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Graggorg

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc

Character’s age: 36

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Do This

Personality Traits: Graggorg is a naturally dominant and easy to anger Orc, he often finds himself in fights over self-perceived slights to his strength or honor, despite parties having no interest in offending.

Ambitions: Graggorg desires to subjugate the world to his own devices, wreaking havoc across the world of Athera in the form of flame and war through the united strength of the Orcish clans- some would say he desires to become the Lord of the Craft.

Strengths/Talents: Graggorg’s strength lies in his strength. He lifts big rocks and headbutts big trees. He’s a tough orc through and through.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Graggorg focuses less on protecting himself in a fight and more on damaging his enemies, often sustaining injuries due to his lack of focus. He compensates for this by wearing heavy steel armorings, but moves significantly slower due to them; causing his retreats to be both clumsy and death-inducing.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 8 feet tall, 325 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You need to expand upon your definitions, maybe use an example?

 

-You failed to include a biography for your character. You need to actually write out your character's biography.

 

-The villainy rules mandate that a villain needs to do his best to try to make fun roleplay for those they're being villainous to. Always try to stay empathetic to how the player you're 'antagonizing' in roleplay is OOCly.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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