[Denied] lukavanraaij whitelist Applications

[lukavanraaij 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: lukavanraaij

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes i do

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: This one:

If you die in roleplay, your character will not remember the events leading up to the death. Waking up knowing who killed you is metagaming. You also may not return to the site of your death for thirty minutes (Unless it was your character's home).

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is like real-life but than in an other character

What is metagaming?: Using information outside of your characters life. ( Like: get online we are getting raid)

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: act like in real life. (That was close, LOOK OUT!, lukavanraaij is missing his shots)

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Mr. Luka

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Elves- Wood elves

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 20 years

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

My character comes from the woods.

I'm on my one, Traveling around the world, to meet and see new people.

I was born in a forest, i was already on my 18 traveling.

I also got into fights but these are still my bad points

I also have a brother (Bob) He is good at fighting i learnt a lot from him.

We were both born  in the same year (1531)

 

Around my 19th i came to this island.

 

I'm good at fishing and cooking, I'm not a lucky person and i'm not strong.

I know many things, like how to build a camp fire or a house

In my city i was one of the biggest builders.

I like building exploring and fishing i hate reading!

so yea that's it

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) happy, fast

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) an archer

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Exploring and building

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Fighting

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He is small, brown hair no scars and green eyes

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://imgur.com/4FMcAH3

[NicktheRed20 215]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Your Roleplay definition is wrong

-Your Metgame definition is very vague

-Your Powergame definition is wrong

Here is a guide to help you, though remember to put everything in your own words:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

-You have little to no server lore. Please make sure to add accurate lore:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

-Please give your character a better goal in life

 

-Please balance your character's strengths and weaknesses

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[NicktheRed20 215]

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