[Denied] Sir_Jake The LumberJack [Application]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: GregorDoesMC

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You must remain In-Character at all times when in-game. If you need to speak out of character, do so in private messages (via /t <playername>) or local OOC chat (via starting your message with "((") Is the rule i love.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope, I understand all of them.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was browsing for RolePlay servers for minecraft in the internet

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I haven't applied before. Or if that's not what you mean then I am very sorry and do not understand.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: It's like acting for a movie or performance

What is metagaming?: Use of information or resources out of the game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Forcing an action on somebody else. ((atleast thats what I heard))

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Jake Lumber

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Forest Dwarf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 30

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Jake Lumber comes from a far far forest named Forest of Hope. He has travelled for 20 years to get to the Dwarven City. Jake was born in the time of Aegis.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Jake likes Romances, Wood & Animals. But he dislikes Crime, War & Murder. He habits near forests.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Jake Lumber want's to be a World Famous LumberJack

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Jake Lumber is one of the best LumberJacks. He can cut through any tree. And he is good at romances.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Charisma since Jake doesn't have any friends and It's hard for him to get new ones.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My character looks like a young bearded dwarf in lumberjack clothes. He is 2 meters tall because an evil mage cursed him with magic. Jake has Silver looking hair and a beard. His only scar is deep down in his heart because when he was little his family was killed by a pack of evil dwarves who wanted wood.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Umm if it's possible can i give u the screenshot in skype? since it says my screenshot too big! It's problably because my Monitor is really big.

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Denied

• All three of your definitions could use expanding on, please do so and in particular for powergaming it'd be useful if you'd include an example.
• Aegis is no longer the current map and hasn't been for over a couple hundred years in roleplay, please include more relevant/up-to-date information in your application. Information on the current can be found here.
• Your biography is not the necessary two paragraphs long length, alongside this you have not included at least three points of lore. Please add some which can be found on the wiki.
• A Dwarf ranges from a height of 4ft to 5'5ft tall, no magic on the server can affect one's height. Please remove all reference to this.
• There is no feasible way for one to get a scar on their heart through combat, which you implied, without dying/bleeding out.
• It is possible to send a AT member a link to your skin, however we'd prefer it if you posted the screenshot in the application if at all possible or even a url to the skin. However, on failing this, yes you can send it through skype/a forum PM if need be.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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