[Denied] [Pending] 2nd whitelist application

[Lillian 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: Neonkitty12134
How old are you?: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i have looked over the rules and agree

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Hostile and Toxic behavior, directed any anyone or on any medium, will not be tolerated.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Your characters cannot interact with each other in any way. The one exception is that you may play the child of your character.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): This is my first white list application. I was searching through tons of role-playing servers but most either had barely any players or when i played (no whitelist servers) them it was to confusing hardly anyone helped me or the events were boring. I found this server and saw great results and i was hoping that this server would finally be the great server i have been looking for.
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: A character you have created yourself that does not exist and a game that makes that character real and you play on that certain game. ( is a role-player)

What is meta-gaming?: Whenever you do something out of your character like talk about something else other then the game . Or when ever you do something that has nothing to do with the story line (roleplaying story) and it isn't something characters in the game know about

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Whenever a player (op) kills someone who can't defend them selfs in any way.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Lillian (no last name)
Character’s sex:  female
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 18

 

Biography  : (1516)(umm does it matter which date i choose or do i not choose at all?) Two Babies were born on the edges of Krinford a peaceful village in the snowy terrain. Alone from the other adults and other children Lillian and her brother Zane grew up alone tending to their parents sheep and never venturing far. Scared of the creatures that lurked. Lillian was a beautiful little girl withe faded brown hair and soft blue eyes. Zane was a handsome young boy with pitch black hair and gray eyes he was unique in looks but none the less handsome. They were the parents trophy's in a way and they hid  them away so no one could see them. There parents taught both of them to always respect the patrons of the pantheon. More over  Xan, Aengul of Order and Guardianship then any of the others. Trust issues and doubt began to appear at the thought of the other races to Lillian and Zane since their parents warned them about how they were untrustworthy. More specifically orks. Lillian tried not to agree with her parents but with her obedient attitude made it difficult. Zane however agreed with all his heart and hated the other races with a passion.  Lillian grew up becoming shy and awkward with people and had poor speaking skills. While Zane became the leader type and was very controlling. And before you knew it a problem emerged. They were attacked by Cervitaur's  and most of there sheep ran from fear. Zane was injured protecting his family and soon died from blood loss. The family were stricken with sadness as they lost a son or for Lillian brother. Things got worse and the snow was killing off all the remaining sheep left. With little to no food the parents sadly had to send off there only daughter and last child to go out into the world to save them and this is where our story begins....

 

Personality Traits: kind,short tempered, loves food, dislikes people who hurt or insult others, shy, horrible at sticking with people, clumsy, bad sense of direction,coward, bad memory, and will try her best to make everyone around her happy as can be (though she fails teribbly).

Ambitions: To be someone who her parents can be proud of.

Strengths/Talents: Running away, Archery, Hiding,Complaining, Getting lost, and Being a genuinely nice person.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hand to hand combat, Sword fighting, Being brave, Trusting others, and letting others take lead.

Appearance: Brown hair fading into a lighter shades of brown, 5'2 in height, no scars, wears a blue undershirt that leads all the way down under the bottom of the vest ,vest leading into a skirt and it has two yellow (gold) buttons, a black belt with a single gold button, wearing brown gloves, and brown small boots.
 

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application is pending for the following reasons:

 

• Your power-emoting definition is partially correct but it's rather vague. Please expand upon it with the help of the link below but remember to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

• It is unlikely that cervitaurs would attack out of the blue. They are protective of their territory but not completely hostile. I would suggest that you use another creature instead of them in your biography. Remember that not every creature has to be mythical. It could be as simple as a pack of wolves attacking or even a mountain lion.

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failure to do so will result in the denial of this application. Please PM me once the changes have been made.

 

If you have any questions or concern, feel free to PM me.

 

 

This application has been denied.

 

You failed to make the reqeusted changes in the 24 hour time period given to you.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

[Chamosial 379]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.