[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Membership Request

[Lowix 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ILostAChallange.
How old are you?: 13.
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Trolling.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Through a friend.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/143356-denied-membership-request/#comment-1349471

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Creating a personality into a character which you use to interact with other players using their own created personality.
What is metagaming?: Using things that you know to your own advantage (example: Player3: "Player1 is attacking Player2." and they wouldn't have known that if Player3 didn't say so.)
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: it's doing something without letting the other person react (example: "Swings sword and chops arm off")

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Lowix.
Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male.
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dwarf.
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 40.
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) I come from Kal'Akash, and I was born in 1502. when I was 14 my father went missing. I later found out that our king Balek Irongut vanished on that same day. I started my wood cutting career, I prospered in my buisness but I felt like it wasn't quite the thing I was destined for; So I joined the Dwarven Army, the training was tough but it was worth the time. One of the training exercizes required us to battle in the dark, I got lost in there for 2 days before I found my way out.
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Quirk: really hates not knowing things, dislikes: Darkness
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A Good Fighter
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Tree Cutting, Melee.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) ranged combat, strategy, mining, dodging, fear of the dark.
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 5ft 3, Strong, Eyes of those of a soldier, Broken Nose.
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/a-dwarf-1510354/

[Readicti 902]

Your application has been put on Pending. You have 24 hours to correct your application and inform me through a private message. Take this time to go through the critique bellow and work on your application. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to shoot me a message.

• First off: this is a great improvement on your last application! Keep it up and we will get you on the server as soon as we can. ^^ 
• Your biography is still a little short: try adding a little background such as, why is he a good story teller? Did he use this skill in the past? How did your character learn how to fight? Why does he want to be a good fighter? Why does he dislike the dark? Did something happen in his past?
• Weaknesses: these all seem to be skills that you can learn through practice. However, I do enjoy that he dislikes the dark, why not include a fear of the dark as a weakness?
• In your biography you say that you were born in Felsen and that your character joined the Oren army. Oren is the human kingdom but your character is a dwarf. I would recommend you change your race to be human or look into dwarven cities on our wiki.

Overall, you just have a few small things to explain in your biography and to tidy up some racial lore. If you have any questions about lore, feel free to send me a message. 

You have made all the necessary changes. Welcome the Isles of Vailor! Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns in the meantime, feel free to message me.

Edited March 30, 2016 by Readicti

[Readicti 902]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Wrynn 1349]

Player Whitelisted.