making my aplication

[sargentgrif 1]

my minecraft account name is sargentgriff.

i am 11.

i live in the ca.

i pretty good with grammar but were all humans i might not spell perfect some times.

every day i get up eat do school after that i like to play a little minecraft then i rest a while have a good day then go to sleep.

i could play 15 hours all together.

i have played minecraft about a half a year.

i no a lot about role play this is wat i no about it you are a character in a game like minecraft and you see in the characters eyes is kinda like a second world but is better.

i expect the server to be fun but kinda challenging i think ill have fun.

i have play one of petris servers and my ohn and some other but they got boring i no this one will be fun is better then them all.

yes i do under stand all the rules and agree with them.

there are elves, orcs, and humans,.

i heared about you from a guy on YouTube named petri.

my lord of the craft account user name is sargentgriff.

my character name is griffin.

orcs is my race.

my biography is that is was a boy orc that grew up to be a very strong orc and one day my dad when out to fight for the orcs agenst the the undead and i said to my dad i wanna come and help and he said no your not ready but i got one of my dads pickaxes and whent out and followed my dad and they attack them and i watched my my dad get ganged up by the undead and he died i cryed for a little then whent out there like a man picked up my dads axe and whooped like orcs do and then i went back home told my mom and left and swore to my self i would kill every undead in aegis.

my characters age is 15.

my characters appearance is that im a strong and smart orc that is a great leader that is not afraid to die for my fathers honor.

my characters personality is that im a big and strong orc that wonts to kill the undead in my dads honor and im friendly and im happy to help any one.

griffin lives his life day bye day thinking of his dad and the day he died he just wonts to have a good life in his dads honor.

yes indeed i can write good and read good.

being quite strong and big he likes to mine and get lots of diamond.

yes being quite strong i can Cary lots of blocks and build very nice houses.

yes i can wield a sword very good and i can wield a axe very good.

yes i enjoy farming lots of wheat because i eat a lot of food.

none more than being able to fight very good and being pretty smart.

http://www.minecraftskins.com/ and my skin is the one that the person who made it is theradoman.

regardless to if i get accepted or not i just wanna say that this is a great server because of you guys keep up the good wark (:

[Tyrion 119]

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  I can't understand something.
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