[Denied] [Pending] My application form for server! :)

[Ansko 0]

Minecraft account name: Tabby_Plays

Age in real life: 12

Have I read and agreed to the rules?: yep

Which rule I agree to the most: Excessive use of trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay is disallowed.

Any rules that confuse me or don't make sense?: No but thanks for your concern.

How did I find out about lord of the craft?: I asked players on minecraft forums for a good minecraft server that is a roleplay!

Links to past whitelist applications: First time I'm playing one! I'm excited though!

 

What is roleplaying?: When you make a character up and behave like them. Like if there hot-headed act angry.

What is metagaming?:  When someone asks you your out of character name and they mean in character and you answer with your out of character name, then that's metagaming!

What is power-emoting?: Simplest form is the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do.

 

Character Name: Trinket McArthur

Character's sex: Male

Character's race: Wood elf

Character's age: 20

Biography: I was born in Courland and was born in 1533. My parents were 18 when they had me and died at 23, making me 5. They died from a human, making me live with my Grandparents (my Mother's parents). My grandmother taught me how to use a bow and sword because she taught my Mother. I also have a cousin, called Spyro who I have met once and still write to today. He gained my trust when he caught  me when we were in the forest.

 

I have travelled nearly across the whole world, but not all. Soon I will meet up with my cousin to protect the world. I always wanted to invent and fight and make my parents proud. I have my father's scarf and

my Mother's eyes and my Father's hair. I try to hide my ears but it is quite hard because I've tried before.... I trained from 6 years old to 18 years old. I left Courland at 16 to travel and then returned at 19.

I hate making friends because I've never trusted anyone besides my family.

 

Personality traits: I always wear my scarf because my father wore it. I like cooking and dancing. Sometimes I can be deep in thought. I hate races getting hurt or being made fun of.

Ambitions: To fight and invent and save the world.

Strengths/talents: Fighting. Inventing. Cooking.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Singing. Flirting/love.

Appearance: Red scarf. Blue eyes, brown hair, pointy ears. Blue suit.

 

Skin: *put them in 'drag files here to attach' *

 

 

 

 

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your application has been put on PENDING

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

Please take a screenshot of your skin in-game (front and back) and insert it into the 'SKIN' section of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me to.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

 

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

 

Firstly, your meta-gaming definition and power-emoting definition are slightly off. I suggest you familiarize yourself with the definitions that I'll link below. Remember to read these definitions and put them into your own words- plagiarizing on LoTC is not allowed whatsoever! 

 

META-GAMING DEFINITION

POWER-EMOTING DEFINITION

 

Secondly, your biography needs expanding and corrections. I suggest you look at the WIKI and incorporate more server lore- as in locations, history, creatures, etc. As well, Elves have an odd aging process. Due to them being immortal, maturing to "18" as a Human would, should take 50 years. I suggest you change the ages of your parents to 50+, as well change your character's age to 30+. Remember to be creative in your biography.

 

Thirdly, add onto your personality traits, ambitions, strengths/weaknesses. Make them interesting, as well relate them to your biography (as in: if your character was bitten by a dog as a child, he would have a fear of dogs, which is a weakness). Remember to be creative in this part of the application.

 

Fourthly, please try and find a larger image of your skin so that I could see its details. Also, add a screenshot of your skin's backside. Thank you.

 

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Ansko.

 

 

 

You can re-apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.