[Denied] DianaSlenderman(RequestIng Application Pending)

[Salyvanas Aradian 0]

Minecraftname:DianaSlenderman
How old are u?:12
Are you aware the server is pg-13:Yes
Have you read rules and agreed to the rules: yes
whats the rule you agree with the most:Cyber bullying because i been cyber bullyed alot and it horrible like you want to go hide in a hole of snake.
Are there any Rule(s) that confuse you or dont make sense: No Nothing cofusing
How did you find out about lordcraft?: I found lord craft out for looking for Medieval servers on youtube because i like to roleplay and interact with others.
Link(S)To Pst whitelist Applications(IfApplictable):None I have no clue Im new.
My Character rp Name: Salyvanas Adridian
Chracter sex: Female
Chracter race: High Elf
Chracter age: 17
BioGraphy: My Charcter Comes from Sancuray. Traveled to:Laruelin, and Salvus.Was born in: feb,2,1999
personinailty traits: Nice,Shy,easily scared, Jumpy, and adventrous. Habbits: (When scared) Jumps back words)Likes: Color:Green,Food: Strawberys,Likes )
Apperance: Hair Color: Rare Sliver,Eyes:Green,Howtall: 2 foot high.Scars:None)Cloths:Wears a dress)
Strengths/Talents: Archery and Druid magic.
Weakness: Swords(fighting with swords) Needs to work on using swords and how to fight with them.
(Roleplaying is: Someone Who Is acting or Playing as a charcter who dose Act and stuff that arent real But is Emotion Or Act.
MetaGaming:Out of Charcters life or like msging or skype or teamspeaks(I use skype)
Power Emoting:A emote To atempt That realistic  be unable tpo do This is like Emotion And a atempt to do something.

Edited April 9, 2016 by Salyvanas Aradian
Forgot to add skin

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

 

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

 

Firstly, I'd like you to expand on your biography. Incorporate server lore, events, cultures, religions, etc. I will link you to the LoTC Wiki, where all this information can be obtained. Please make this biography at least two paragraphs.

 

Secondly, I'd like you to expand on your character's personality traits, ambitions, strengths/weaknesses, as well their appearance. Be creative and outstanding.

 

Thirdly, your definitions are remotely correct, yet hard to understand. I will link you to all three definitions, I'd like you to read them, study them, and then restate them in your OWN WORDS. Please DO NOT copy/paste these definitions into your application.

 

ROLEPLAYING

METAGAMING

POWER-EMOTING

 

I also suggest that you read THIS guide on how to properly apply. You do not have to, it is merely a suggestion.

 

 

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Diana.

 

 

 

You can re-apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.