[Denied] My Application: Elthorn Alerond

[Elthorn Alerond 0]

            Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: MrLemonhe4d

How old are you?: I am 13 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am fully aware!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You may not break blocks to get past LWC locks.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking around for a good roleplaying server, and this server popped up, so I thought I would give it a try!

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting out a role that is most likely a fictional character, taking part in a real life, yet fictional story (basically a real life movie or book) !                 

What is metagaming?: It means when you play a game, you push farther to advance the game into different territories, expanding the universe.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: It is describing what is happening in a scene through text eg. Player1 punches Player2, Player2 steals Player1’s sword ect.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Elthorn Alerond

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 22

Biography : Elthorn was born into a decent family. He grew up in a small farm town with a large wheat field.  His mother was an artisan and his father was a weaponsmith. He had a brother Barron, who loved to play with him in the grasses and swordfight him with sticks. Alast, the event struck, killing everyone in the town. A dragon descended from the heavens, raining fire upon the village. People shrieked and yelled and tried to escape.

                  Elthorn’s house alit with his brother and mother still inside. He managed to hide in the tall grass near the village with his father. Elthorn and his father searched the town and mourned over their lost ones. Everyone died, except for them. His father raised him in a nearby town and taught him the art of armor and weapon making, and the art of swordfighting. By the age of 18, his father let Elthorn out into the world, hoping, he would one day become a great adventurer, just like his father was before him.

 

Personality Traits: Elthorn is a Noble, Hands On, get the job done type of guy. For him Blood runs thicker than water (family means most)

Ambitions: Elthorn hopes to slay the dragon that destroyed his village, and bring peace to this land.

Strengths/Talents: Elthorn is a skilled swordsman and archer, and is good at finding clues.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Elthorn needs to learn how to disguise himself, and increase his horseback skills.

Appearance: Elthorn is about 6”1 and has dark brown hair, brown eyes, and an olive skin tone, he has many scars on his back and chest from when he was caught stealing and was whipped. He has nimble fingers and a stare that can scare a troll.

Skin:

 

[Kilig 333]

Darn, unfortunately I have to deny this application but don't worry because you can reapply after 24 hours.

• Correct your definition of metagaming.
• Correct your powergaming definition.
• Make your character's bio at least two paragraphs in length.
• Your character can not be of noble blood, nor can they reside with a noble family.
• Your character's bio must contain a minimum of three pieces from our lore. For your convenience, I've linked you to the wiki page that covers the race of your character: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

When you re-apply, be sure to make these corrections and then you should be accepted. Feel free to send me a private message if you have any questions!

[Kilig 333]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.