[Denied] [Pending] BDPVPRO - Eulein Hamlyn Character Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: RozeQuartz

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read through the rules thoroughly and agree with them all.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The PVP/RP rules for combat to keep fighting fair and fun for every player.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I believe I understand all the rules fairly well.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking for Roleplay Servers out of boredom, and this server peaked my interests, so I decided to join.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): No past Applications have been submitted.

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Assuming a role of someone or something, and acting out their actions.

What is metagaming?: A character having knowledge of something outside of the RP. (OOC information)

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Roleplaying in a way that makes your character severely more powerful than others. (OP, Godmodding)

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Eulein (E-you-lin) Hamlyn (Ham-lin)

Character’s sex: Male.

Character’s race: Human Highlander.

Character’s age: 18 Years of age.

Biography  

Eulein Hamyln, born in Seahelm, grew up in the house of a small town blacksmith and a shoemaker, living in a small cabin with an average stone blacksmith's hut built into the side. Though they made two products of reasonable value, the two made a less than average wage, having enough money for clothing and food. At the age of 6, Eulein's mother died of heart failure, and family lost much money from the loss of a product, now starving from lack of food and clothing.

At the age of 12, Eulein decided to wander into the more populated area of Seahelm with only a worn bow and little food. He met a stranger in the streets, telling him that he had work for him, and would pay for the murder of a married couple. Accepting the only offer he's been given, Eulein loaded his bow and killed the husband and wife of the "Lineenburg" family, bringing home enough money to feed both him and his father, however his father was dead by the time he came back, due to heart failure, the same reason his mother had fallen.

He, with no experience in metalworking or shoemaking, turned to assassination, avoiding visitors, and living alone until the age of 16. At that age, he left his run-down house to move to the more populated area of the city. He slept in the street and killed as his livelihood under the false name "Livian Hartlyn".

Personality Traits: He is very untrusting, only trusting anyone after quite a few meetups. He tends to also stay alone most of the time, keeping away from big crowds unless the time calls for it.

He also has an interesting liking to dairy products. Hm.

Ambitions: He strives to become a world-renowned assassin and to take down some of the biggest and most guarded people in the world.

Strengths/Talents: He, due to his usage of the weapon at a very young age, is a master at bows and ranged weapons. He also is proficient with knives, although they are not his weapon of choice.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Unlike most assassins, he is not very fast, tending to stay behind and use his bow from long range. He is also very religious, and will not take jobs conflicting with his morals or involving friends.

Appearance: He measures at 5 Feet and 3 Inches (5'3) with lightly-tanned skin and blue eyes. He has dark brown hair, with a small scar on the top-left of this face.

Skin: http://imgur.com/a/qw8YL

[CheekyNolan 5420]

 

 

 

Pending

• Your biography does not have the necessary amount of server lore, please add at least two more point from the wiki found here. You could mention more places your character has visited or people speaking (notable figures)/events you would have witnessed in character.
• I doubt a 12 year old could become a successful assassin as you said your character did and being an assassin from a young age is very cliche and overused. I'd recommend removing all reference to being an assassin and coming up with a more original backstory.

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM me!

 

Denied

• The above changes were not made.

You may re-apply in 12 hours. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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