[Denied] Note Mark

[[ToKi] Note 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: NoteKlix
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyberbullying and cyberbullies will be punished.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a 100% Roleplay server..
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be another charecter or be living another life usually in a game.
What is metagaming?: Breaking the 4th wall while role-playing or making different decisions with your charecter using information your charecter shouldn't know.
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Dictating what happens to another charector without the owner of that charectors permission.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Note Mark
Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) 
Paragraph 1 (Born to 10 years old)

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Paragraph 1 (Born to 10 years old)
Born in Sancuary. Lived with parents Caroli Lost and Malguf Mark in a small village.
  Everyone knew the family and respected them and Note .The child attended school and was taught the history of the realm like anyone else until he was 10. He fell asleep one night and woke up not finding his parents anywhere. Note searched the town and asked everyone but no one seemed to remember who he was or know who his parents were. He gave up hope and started crying alongside a bar when a tall elf in a purple cloak said to follow it. Lost and with broken emotions he followed the man into the forest to an old shack. After he entered the shack it became apparent it was not his. There was another man with a sword ready for them. Note quickly realized what was happening and looked to the cloaked man for help, yet he had fled. Note was locked in a room by the crude owner of the shack and cried himself to sleep. When he woke up the door was unlocked and halfway opened. He exited the room to the horrific sight of the corpse of the man who had locked him up. There was a purple crown sitting on the dead mans chest with a note on it that said: "For Note". As Note donned the crown he realized it fit him to perfection. After that he fled to the forest knowing he had no life else ware.

 

 Paragraph 2 (Age 10-20)
 

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Paragraph 2 (Age 10-20)
10 Years later after barely surviving the constant Amber Wolf attacks Note woke up one night to see the cloaked figure again. Note followed it without saying a word- until he fell into a deep pool of water that appeared out of nowhere. He cried for help but felt like he couldn't move. The cloaked figure reached down and grabbed Note's hand. Note felt himself pass out just as he reached the surface. When he woke up it was still night, and the sun was rising. He was beside the pool he had fallen in to. As he stood up he saw a reflection in the pool and froze. His eyes were yellow instead of blue. He turned to his side to see the part of the purple cloak ripped off onto some brush. On the piece of cloth was a note. It said this: "You are wondering why your eyes are yellow. When I pulled you out of that pool you were asleep. I spent hours pumping water and bile out of your lungs. I think you could have been dead at one point. I was finally able to get a heartbeat. I believe you are experiencing severe jaundice. (Jaundice is a real thing.
Jaundice, also referred to as icterus, is the yellow staining of the skin and sclerae (the whites of the eyes) by abnormally high blood levels of the bile pigment, bilirubin

) I do not know when or if your eyes will return to normal but do not worry. I believe that you were meant to be great. Find out what you must become."

  Paragraph 3 (Discovering what he was to become Age 21)
 

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  Paragraph 3 (Discovering what he was to become Age 21)
Note pondered his next move for months, with not one amber wolf attack, until he came up with a conclusion. He would find out what he was to become. His first step was to research elf history. He traveled to Fi'Ceru on foot until he finally made it. Every day he went to the library and researched. He would ask historians about lore and new ideas, until he heard about a story that struck home with him. there was a women he visited that showed him writing from an ancient language. Note could not read it but it had a picture of a purple crown under the text. The women said one word. "King"

Paragraph 4 (21-23 understanding his quest)

 

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Paragraph 4 (21-23 understanding his quest)

Note spent years, traveling from town to town, and going through warzones just to find what the women meant. At the age of 23 he had just about given up. Every time he heard a new elder say they knew someone who might know something it would be a false clue, or the person would have been killed long ago. He finally was able to find someone though. An old gypsy. He had heard about her from an innkeeper. He found her location on the outskirts of a town and went there. As he rushed to and into her hut, Note realized the gyspy was dead. He cursed himself and was about to walk out when he saw a note on a desk. he observed it and it said: "You are looking in all the wrong places. Meet me in the center of this town." The next day Note was searching the center of the town to see the purple cloaked figure watching him. Note ran up to it asked it: "Who are you?" The figure simply took of the hood. Note was shocked. It was his father. . "I am the one you have searched for. Ask any questions now." Note asked his father many things and learned many things. he found about elf history and who his ancestors were. His father than said this: "When you were born your mother and I knew you were special. We always did. But when you were 5 we were visited by a Daemon that threatened us if we did not give you to him. Of course we refused but he said he knew more about you and that if we did not give you to him you would never become who you were meant to be. Your mother and I slammed the door on this fool and told him to leave us. The next day we received a message from the messenger saying our son was going to fulfill his destiny no matter what we did. After that nothing new happened." Note asked what happened that night he couldn't find him or his mother. "That night while you were asleep the Daemon came back. I heard a scream from the kitchen. I ran in to see your mother, dying and the daemon running out. That night was the worst night of my life. I ran after the daemon but he got away. He dropped something in the chase though. A scroll. Here it is. That is all I can do. I must go now." Note's father than left.

Paragraph 5 (His Ancestors Letter)
 

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As Note opened the scroll it read this: "The Dream of The First Mark.
Before I begin recording this dream I must say this for future Marks. I am the first Mark. I changed my last name since my father was abusive and I hated him. That's where our family name comes from, But somewhere in our family line I believe one of us will become royalty.
This was my dream: There were many kingdoms. All spotted with darkness. Not pure. Covered by all different races. In the center of these cities is a house. I walked into the house to see myself, but not me. He was younger and stronger. He looked like this: he had pale blue skin, brown straight hair, and was wearing a purple crown. he had a black cape with yellow stripes. He turned to me and opened his eyes. They were completely yellow. He called me grandfather and welcomed me into his house. Neither of us said anything for a while until he broke the silence with: Do you know who I am? I responded with a no. He said this 'I am the first king of our bloodline. I am different than my father, the father of my father, and the father of that father. But I am like you.' Suddenly I was on a throne in a courtyard. Below me everything was darkness. At first it whispered and slithered towards me. Than all of a sudden the one who had yellow eyes was beside me and said: 'Bow.' And the darkness bowed and slowly become brighter and brighter until it was a crowd of elves. I than knew that one of my ancestors destiny was to become a king."
At the very bottom of the scroll some newer text with different handwriting was added. It said:
"Son. The crown you are wearing was made by my grandfather, the son of the first Mark. It was made from steel. But the steel was heated with a mixture of sand. this caused it to become slightly translucent. It was made for you."
 

Note realized. He was meant to be a King. But every king needs a queen. thus began his quest,
to find his Queen.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) This character has sarcastic humor, is looking for a queen, is unique, and nibbles on his fingernails. He likes to have fun. He is chill and very blank to new people. He doesn't like tall dwarves. He also dislikes archers.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Find a queen.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Axe combat, and magic. Note is stealthy, strong, has enhanced elven powers, such as living longer lifespan, being stronger, slightly regenerative powers, and can also use google translate. (The last one is a joke btw)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) This characters weakness is bright, bright, light. It negates his magic.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)
6' 4"
Brown Hair
Pale Blue Skin
Purple & Black Clothing
Yellow Eyes
Black Cape With Intricate Design
Purple Glass-Like Crown.
Made this myself:
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Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)
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I have C4D

[Chamosial 379]

 

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[Chamosial 379]

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