[Denied] character application

[Carmacon 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:carmacon

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:o metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: my frind told me

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):none

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:pretending to be a charcter you not in a game

What is metagaming?:using outside information to use in game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:when you say stabs in heart instead off attempts to stab in the heartand also like taking on three people at once when your a villager

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)millyn carmacon

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)human heartlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)when millyn was born in 1516 in felsen his mother immediately thought he looks like an archer so she wanted him to be an archer when carmacon was 8 he learned to fire a bow so he exceeded greaty in archery. when he was 12 he could shoot stuff from miles away he loved his life. at 12 he met a kid who was a fighter named vondaken fraught he was so stubborn he said no to there friend ship. 1o years later he went to norland to join the nortuppen he wasn't going to let the empire push him around

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)he is quick in friends he is stubborn he wants peace for everyone

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)he wants to have the world peaceful

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) archery and charming people

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)using swords and fighting melee

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)scar on his eye and blue tip from a special tea that splashed on his head and turned part of his hair blue

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)http://imgur.com/t5MIR8Y

 

[Skylez 870]

This application has been denied  for the following reasons.

 

- Your Metagaming definition is a bit vague, please expand on it.

 

- Your character's biography is too short, make it at least two paragraphs.

 

- The fact that your character can shoot things from miles away is somewhat powergaming, change it to a more realistic statement.

 

- Add more to your character's traits, strengths and weaknesses.

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me from my forums profile!

 

 

[Skylez 870]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.