[Denied] white list application

[matt graham 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:FredBear904

How old are you?:21

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:abusing glitches are not allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: friends

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):this is my first application

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying: to make and act like a chacaracter which you have the choices to designe, build , and choose what they act and do.

What is metagaming?: so meta gaming is where you lets say are roleplaying and hear something in ooc and then use that against someone in character

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: powergaming is where you build a character up to be unrealistic and overpowering

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) matt graham

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)wood elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)69

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera. Matt graham was born on the first of march in Sancuary. When he was 17 he moved to the land of plenty where he found a giant hollowed out tree and lived here for 20 years. Matt has travled to some of the best places that supply anyone with matrial for primitve learning such as Salvus and Courland.He one day decided to go hunting one morning he made a fire primitvly then grabbed his atlatl and went down the trails like so many times before he stalked up on a big deer. He stood up raised the atlatl and spooked the deer. He thought he needed a new weapon. So he went to the nearest village and went to the weapon trader and he saw a bow and traded for it this was the best thing he ever seen. He went back home and shot and shot and shot he perfected this skill. Then he tested how good he found a old battle helmet he measured out 100 yards and shot the arrow and drilled it and ever sense he hunted when he needed to. One day he decided to try to join the army of the nearest village and made it from there he found a love for killing people that tried to attack he perfected the bow more and if he ran out of arrows he would murder people with two 20in knives and now is seeking higher ranks for any army. He always explorers where ever he goes He wants to go to Fi'Ceru because of the good hunting, thier army, and fishing

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) he's soft hearted. fun. angry. and he hates people

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)to become the greatest archer he also wishes to one of the highest ranks in a army because of his skills.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)he is destined to beat high elves in archery. his strengths is when he gets any bow in his hand because he is the best at archery

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) he is overpowered by anyone who has ruby weapons because it takes over his ability to use his bow right

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) they look primitive wearing buckskins and sandals. He has black hair. He is 6ft 2in and has 2 scars making a X across his face

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions are poorly written, the the former being incorrect, and the latter being very hard to understand.

 

-Your entire application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and very hard to understand.

 

-Your character's biography is very confusing.

 

-There're no ruby weapons in Lord of The Craft, and your character's weakness for them literally makes no sense.

 

-Your character's minecraft skin is not suitable for a wood elf, as wood elves standardly have dark skin and dark hair, and have elven ears.

 

-You failed to wait even 5 hours before re-applying.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours. Re-applying before than will result in being banned form applying for a duration of time.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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