[Denied] [Pending] Ernie_tat2

[Ernie_tat2 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Ernie_tat2

How old are you?:21

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yea

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: non toxic , anti bully rules ,i rather have fun and role play the right way

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no i agree with everthing

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: server list , and i love rpgs!

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:The action of pretending to be someone else , a different person ,build a fictional reality that revolves arround this new character

What is metagaming?: by not mixing using knowledge acquired irl and in game , like your friend tells you something at school about atacking someone and then you using that knowledge in game beacause that would break your character

What is power-emoting (powergaming)? When someone only focuses on becoming the strongest player by using everything at their disposal often sacrificing RPG elements

 

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Dante Zed

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 100

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Im a travel that comes from really far and exotic lands this land has a somewhat of an oriental vive to it ,it was a small island not known to many , i was trained in sword and bow combat even i was never a great swords man ,my father was the owner of the island dojo , he died when i turned 18 from lung cancer , my mother she was a healer in the village she blamed herself for not being able to heal my dad she went into deep depression, and died a few years after from an unknown cause , after that i desided to my land and head to the main land and settle for a new life , im what they would call a far folk , i travel around the kingdom of the humans until i settled for Savoy Oren , in search of my independence and in the meaning of existence. As i come to these new land , i am presented with a new church on canon that humans in there region seem to praise , i found myself hard to come to term with a new religion so fast so im hesitant to join , i am looked as an outsider and people seem to miss understand me , but that has always been the case for me Dante , and that the path i seem to have accepted for myself , i look to make allys and become a powerful influence on this land , and fight for the human race.

I come to this new land of oren to find out its the largest kingdom of the human race , feeling like a nobody around such a powerful kingdom makes made me want to help in anyway the kingdom might need my assistance.

 

People say i look serious and never relaxed , with an anxious attitude and always on the look for anything that might come ,  i have black hair and a dark red armor ,wearing sandals and a bandanna on my head , this is my villages ninja armor.  And now that im settled in this new town i look to change my ways of being so closed out to others and explore what this new land has to show me and teach me.

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits; likes and dislikes?) skeptic in the search of meaning ,smokes pipe tabaco and likes archery , likes making friends , and exploring for adventure

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a great warrior and archer feared by his enemy and respected by allys and earn a status of power in the realm

Strengths/Talents: (what is your characer really, really good at?) archery and leading

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) patience and sword fighting

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) black hair , hazel eyes . 6.1

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

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I have gone through this and I feel that I need to deny the application for now, you did the changed but they were not quite on spot.

I will personally send you a forum message to talk this through with you so that you understand what I mean.

Just do not give up! Like I said we will go through things in detail in PM's!

 

 

 

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• Your explanation of powergaming is a little confusing, can you clarify with a different example perhaps?

 

• You need to expand the biography much more, write a story! Two paragraphs long or so, a backstory that also fits with your character. 

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[AlmondTree 418]

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