[Denied] Aplication

[Creeperhunter132 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Creeperhunter132

How old are you?:16

What timezone are you in?:europa

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):
Yes im aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I agreed the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Cyber-Bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):i understand all the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking for rpg servers then i found this one

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):it takes 20 minutes to do that my computer is slow

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):i logged on the server to see if it is a nice one or i would apply ad this moment

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?Ur in a role of a characture u think u are ur making him into the characture

What is metagaming?:it isnt allowed on the server so if these 2 thing powergaming and meta gaming arent writing its just getting denied im oke with that

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Leo

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)1978

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)he likes meat dislike Green food his habbits dont know what that means

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)HE's melee he puls his strength out of his Rage

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) hes weak to fire

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)ill send the skin whenif uploaded it to my skin in mc

But this was my ap i hope this one wont be denied but it wil yet again if thats the case im out with aplying to this server im not treathing u but it takes so long for me thann to even understand the first things

Edited July 2, 2016 by Creeperhunter132
Remade it

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-You failed to link your previous applications. While this would've been fine alone, it is something to note along with all the other issues in this application.

 

-Your entire application is deplorably written, with typos, errors, lazy use of 'text speech, and is un-understandable in many areas.

 

-Your roleplaying definition is un-understandable, and is deplorably written.

 

-You need to say the definitions of power-gaming and meta-gaming... The page defining them is literally linked in the application format.

 

-You failed to include something even to fill the blank for the power-gaming definition.

 

-You failed to list your character's age.

 

-You failed to write literally anything but the year '1978' for your character's biography. 

 

-The world Lord of The Craft takes place in has it's own dating system. Currently, the year is in the 1500s, so being from 1978 would be over 400 years in the future from the current time period.

 

-You dont describe your character's personality- just his preference for meat over vegetables.

 

-You failed to include your character's ambitions.

 

-Your character's strengths are un-understandable.

 

-Every single person alive is weak to fire, as fire burns and consumes people, so hence 'weakness to fire' is not a valid weakness, unless your character is specifically terrified of fire, in which you'd need to say such.

 

-You failed to include a description of your character's appearance.

 

-You failed to include the minecraft skin you'd be using for this character.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours from this denial.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM (Personal message) if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.