[Denied] Application!

[TridusGamingYT 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Ashlog (Username) My real Name : Jeloux Enriquez

How old are you?: 13 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about toxicity not being tolerated because this will make roleplaying much more enjoyable!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found this server through a youtube video.. But mostly through my curiosity.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): First time

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting out a character who is fictional/non-fictional. For Example, Peter Pan, William Shakespeare, and more. (In my own words.)

What is metagaming?: It is like a 3rd person story for the player, but that player control the character through 1st person. It maybe confusing (I know). For Example, the player knows that someone got killed (in-game). But the character he is controlling doesn't know.

What is power-emoting : Expressing actions through words in chat. For Example, *William ran as fast as he can.* (I can't really make an example, but you get the idea)

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:  William Oathbraker

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s Race: Human

Character’s age: ( 26 years old

Biography  :

                      William Oathbraker came from the city of Amiot, a populated city located in the middle of Dragon Valley.  He once was a ruler of the kingdom called

Gigantolot. After civil war struck his empire, people rebelled against the laws of William, even though he was the one who did great deeds for other people. When the rebellion grew stronger, he decided to leave Amiot and break the oath of being the king. This is when he renamed himself, William Oathbraker. No one knew where he went, but one wise king said that William asked advise from him to where he should live peacefully. Rumors said that he ventured out to the Isles of Vailor to rebuild his empire within the core of this rich island.

                      His boat has been found in the outskirts of the island, but no trails was found after that clue. William will always be in the dark and the shadows, and will reap human's minds for ages. Also, people has also said that he was a reborn of King Phoenix The Wise who made peace with the Mages and the Orcs. Legend also has said that William will rise again from the blackness of days and seek justice for who caused his empire to shatter. In the legend ,it also states that his cape will be seen in dreams more and more when his rise is near. More dreams about him happen more in near the south-western mountains. People tried to track him down but no one comes back. Dare to try? Visit Kal' Akash.\

                  (Is it Good?)

               

Personality Traits: ( He mostly goes out during the night and is rarely seen during the day. He has a habit of stalking people when they're not looking. He likes beer and wine. He likes living alone. He doesn't like anybody bothering him. He is a dependent man.

Ambitions: He wants to be a model for everyone but in a private way.

Strengths/Talents:  Melee, Bow and arrow, hunting, good deep voices. He designs detailed bases and buildings.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  Friendship and Charisma.

Appearance: He looks like a rugged man that has been in a rumble. 6 foot 3" , Blond Colored hair. Has a big Eye Scar.

Skin:  http://i.imgur.com/uTcyG95.png[/img] Hope you like the skin.

[AlmondTree 418]

Denied

 

This application is unfortunately denied due the application needing a bit too much work in it's current state.

I would like you to take your time with the reasons that I will list below!
If you need help you can contact me or any other AD member for assistance.

 

-Elaborate your metagaming definition, you're totally close there but I just want to make sure you understand it.

-Your powergaming definition isn't right, it needs to be corrected.

-Your character can not hail from distant lands not in the server lore.

-Expand your biography along with server lore.

 

-Please balance your character strengths and weaknesses so that they match, such as combat.

[AlmondTree 418]

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