[✗] [Pending] Whitelist Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Najae123

How old are you?: 12

What timezone are you in?:  UTC

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes i am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You must remain In-Character at all times when in-game. If you need to speak out of character, do so in private messages (via /t <playername>) or local OOC chat (via starting your message with "((")

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope, none confuse me.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Found it Via youtube.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Haven't applied to any really.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I have logged in.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: You take on a role that you have seem fit for you, and you play as your character.

What is metagaming?: Knowing the name OOC and use the information IC

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: You force a player to do the action you want them to do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Grashnack Bone-Grinder

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Orc

Character’s age: 25

Biography: Grashnack is borned in Iron Uzg, born in the capital Gundz'koth. His father and mother were Farmers. The family had a farm in the outskirts of Gundz'koth. They lived very happily and everything was well for they're family, and Grashnack was a happy little kid, playing with his freinds. But then one time came a band of Humans and raided and killed his parents. And when he lost his family, he was all lonely and scared. And he wondered of to Ard Ghorock. He found a family of Orcs, and took him happily into they're family. And when he became 18 he learned to fight and Swim. He was a Strong and Agile orc, and he came into the army and fought several battles. Once he got scarred and became unconcous. And his family got information of him. Dead, but he woke up when the battle ended. And seven years later, he became a Mercenary and Traveller. (IDK i tried my best ;( )

Personality Traits: Likes fighting. and he is friendly to most people. He has a hobby of fighting in the training grounds. He is loyal and a good listener.

Ambitions: A brave fighter.

Strengths/Talents: Really Strong and Agile.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Bad swimmer and Leader

Appearance: |5 Battle scars|Leather Boots| Leather Tunic|Red Gloves|Leather Pants|Metal Arm pads|Leather Backpack|

Skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orc-2087951/

[Remyy 952]

Under Review.

[Remyy 952]

Pending

Your application has been put on pending for the various reasons below, but alas do not fret! as this only means you need to change several things before you may be accepted! you have 24 hours to make the changes below and PM me once you are finished.

 

• Your characters biography is too short! perhaps add more lore to it. Or go deeper into your characters past; I.e a dramatic experience, a event that made him want to be something, ect.
• Orcs tend to be a more bloody race, meaning with their curse they more than likely would not be a very 'sweet or friendly'. Perhaps if you wish him to be more kind than other Orcs, give him a more reason to be, as growing up in a Orcish city would probably make him learn and live like a average Orc.
• Orcs are large and ferocious beasts, most of the races in fact are completely scared of them; Meaning his parents would could POSSIBLE die from a raid by a band of Humans if they had good numbers, yet if there were many Orcs when they raided they more than likely would have not died. If you wish to keep this aspect, perhaps switch it! maybe his parents died whilst raiding a smaller Human town!
• Why does he wish to be a good fighter? this is not stated within your biography, please state as to why he wishes to become one,
• Your strengths and weakness do not line up with the biography, please state as to why he is a stronger fighter, and not a very good swimmer and leader.

 

You have 24 hours to PM me and fix the required changes to your application,

Feel free to PM me with any problems or concerns you may have.

 

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Sadly your application has been denied, please look at the Reason(s) bellow before you reapply!

You may reapply in 12 hours.

• You have not completed the changes needed in your pending application, next time be sure to fix it within the 24 hour time frame you are givin to edit it.

You may reapply in 12 hours.

 

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.