[✗] Jakraes's Whitelist application

[Jakraes 51]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Jakraes

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?: GTM +0

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): 15

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Excessive trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay are disallowed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: In a youtube video

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Jakraes

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Wood elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?;

He doesnt know his age but the elder of the village told him that he was a very young man probably he was 20 years old and was found in a great tree, Far from the main continent... he talked with a captain, saying that he wanted to go to the main continent.

The captain asked for gold, but he didnt have.... the captain told him:

-If you want to go with me, you need pay gold, or you will work in my ship until we arrive

Days passed, he was very tired, suddenly someone shouted:

-Captain! I can see land!

His eyes where shinning because of the beauty of the city....

When the ship docked, he leaves and prepares himself for the greatest adventure of his life

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): He likes walking in a forest and adventuring, he hates

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): He aspires to be an adventurer

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): He is good with archery and solving puzzles.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): He really wants to practice magic

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?): He is a tall person, he has brown hair and he doesnt have a scar... yet....

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/8280752/wood-elf/

 

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Please add to your biography, it's quite short and doesn't explain your character's life very well. In addition, your biography needs more lore. To find server lore, you may visit the wiki HERE.

 

- Add to your personality traits, please!

 

- Your weakness isn't a weakness. In any event, please have at least three weaknesses.

 

- Add to your character's strengths.

 

- You're missing your definitions! Roleplaying, metagaming, and power gaming. You must include those.

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.