[✗] Minotaur3105's application

[Minotaur3105 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Minotaur3105

How old are you?:14

What timezone are you in?: British summer time

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: you may not kill more than 20% of other players livestock for any reason

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: the internet

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):no

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: the acting out or performance of a particular role

What is metagaming?: going off the limits of the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:forcing someone to do something

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Fodagog

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Uruks

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

 

My character comes from Athera and I have traveled to Kal’akash so I could stay with my leader and defend him to my last breath. I was one of the origins of the Uruks and and stayed with them for numerous years earning a place in the legion.

I my choice of weapon is an axe and has seen many battles and many kills, It has served me all my lift and I don’t expect that to change. I want death to dwarves and anyone who stands in my way.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

quirks:none

likes: killing people and other orcs

dislikes: dwarves and high elves

habits: swinging his weapon

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)a great warrior

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) close combat

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)archer

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

scars:yes

height: 5 foot 10

hair color:none

skin color: green

eye color: red

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• We know you have heard of the Lord of the Craft server on the internet. Please specify the exact location where. Was it a server list website? Perhaps the few youtube videos about the LotC? Please specify;
• Your character's biography is vague and short. This part is one of the most important parts of an application, as it gives the Application Team a chance to learn more about your character. The Application Team expects applicants to write at least two paragraphs of medium length in the biography part.What have they gone through? How was their childhood? What events changed them? Please be more in-depth in that part too. 
• The server's Role Playing is done in third-person emoting. So, It's not "I did blah blah.", It's more like "Fogalog did blah blah.", please write your biography according to that, in third person.
• Your character's ambitions, strengths and weaknesses are vague, undetailed. Please explain in-depth what your character is good at doing other than close combat, what he needs to work on other than "archer", and what he aspires to be other than a "great warrior". The Application Team expects applicants to provide their application with at least three strengths and three weaknesses, consisting of mental traits as well as physical. A few examples to that would be: patience, sense of humour etc.
• I don't thinking "swinging his sword" is a proper habit. Please tell us what your character tends to do often, almost to the point they do it unintentionally, without their control.

 

You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.