[✗] whitelist application --ultan1--

[ultan1 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:ultan1

How old are you?:  15

What timezone are you in?: united kingdom

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):  yes

 

 

 

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no hacking (because it makes the game less fun)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I agree with all of them and I understand why they are rules...

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for a roleplay server and I found this on a listed server site on the internet....

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):  yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:it is like acting in a movie ....you roleplay as a character

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, in other words it means that it goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming is when you are forcing actions against another player.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (most people know him as the guardian griever..... but his real secret identity is coyleo utin) note : please keep this secret in game

Character’s sex: (male)

Character’s race: (farfolk ---human)

Character’s age: (his current age is 43)

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): coyleo utin was a poor young man who lived with his father as his other family members disappeared when he was just a kid....one dark day him and his father got into a huge argument and coyleo utin ran away (when he was 22 years old) despite he was so poor he never really lived anywhere anyway as his father and him struggled to    survive through out the years......after 40 days coyleo utin encountered an olog camp which he was then imprisoned into a rusty cage for trespassing.... for 18 days he was starving with hunger until one day a mysterious diamond pickaxe appeared next to him he used it to mine down the cage and escape...but one unfortunate olog saw him and chased after him  only managing  to rip coyleos hand off before its head was hacked off by the anger of coyleo utins mysteriously powerfull pickaxe which he now names it FAR CRY........ after weeks he was hoping to return back to his father and say sorry to him but one strange day he found the body of his father but his head was chopped off and missing.... all of a sudden he became ever so angry of what he saw and he will hunt and hunt untill one day he finds the rightful murderer of his father and retrieve his head and avenge his revolting  death..... on this very day coyleo is a ghost story to most orcs but most of the time orcs would laugh at the stupidity of it......to most he is named as the guardian griever....................(nobody knows exactly where he was born or what date it currently was.)

Personality Traits: (he likes to battle , eat golden carrots-- nobody knows why , and looks after FAR CRY--- his pickaxe)

Ambitions: (brave unfearfull..and tells people to never give up....)

Strengths/Talents: (bounty hunting he can use FAR CRY as a wepon and a powerfull mining tool)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (his lack of basic intelegence...because he was so poor he did not have great acsess to his educational needs such as reading and writing and telling the differences between different cultural races...)

Appearance: (ragged cloths [he hides far cry at the back of his ragged shirt] , ripped hand --after in battle with the olog/ mentioned in the biography section , dark skinned and has blonde/ brown hair)---------I currently made the skin by using this site http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin-editor/----------------------- I apologise for not having  a clear screen shot of the skin... hopefully u will see it in game

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography states that your character found a magical pickaxe while being imprisoned, in his reach, appearing out of nowhere. This is... pretty much one of the least likely situations here. Please be a bit more realistic with your application;
• Another logical flaw in your application is how a male human, 22 years of age, being starved for 18 days broke iron bars with a mining tool. The hunger would have consumed nearly all his physical energy, probably making it almost impossible to stand up, let alone break iron bars with a mining tool;
• Diamond pickaxe is not a lore-approved item on the Lord of the Craft. The lore replacement for the item is "blue steel", which is an alloy. Please change that part of your application;
• Far Cry;
• Your skin for the server is beyond unacceptable. Please find a suiting skin instead, matching the Medieval theme of the Lord of the Craft;
• Most of the events in your biography don't have an explanation to them. How did the pickaxe appear? How did the father die? How did he fight the Olog? How did the family of the character disappear? Please make the necessary changes to the appropriate part;
• Your application contains many grammatical and spelling errors. Please have another look at the application after you're done with it. This is especially important since the main language of the Lord of the Craft is English, and you will be required to form complete, clear sentences and paragraphs in English, with little to no grammatical or spelling errors;
• Why is your character called the "Guardian Griever"? Why not his original name? Your biography never explains it;
• Your character's ambitions are a part where tell the server about what your character aspires to be, not what he tends to do;
• Your character's personality traits are a part where you tell the server about how your character behaves, not only what he likes and dislikes. A few examples would be patient, generous, stingy, short tempered et cetera;
• Eating golden carrots would probably be the demise of your character, and I would like to remind you that Minecraft mechanics are not all a part of the lore of the Lord of the Craft server;
• Killing a single Olog after escaping a cage would probably not be a ghost story among the orcs.

You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.