[✗] Application Form No.2

[Yagami 113]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Yagami

How old are you?:14

What timezone are you in?:United Kingdom

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):i am aware of this

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The abuse of glitches or any any exploits are not tolerated 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no i understand them all

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube: Probablynotapanda

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):i have logged onto the server

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:The act or performance of a role, either consciously or unconsciously, and has control over the character and its behaviours

What is metagaming?:Its where you have not followed the rules of the role play and has started making up you own game that isn't what's right

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:power-emoting is an act of forcing the results of a character actions, without giving the other player a chance to consult 

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Yagami

Character’s sex: (male or female?)female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)27

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)i was born in the year 1524 in the town of Krinfird, i have traveled far in my life time, i have been alone my whole and wish to staythat way, my parents were burn a krisp by a horid house fire, my destination for my traveles is to hopfully get to Al-Wakruh i have met poeple on my way, but never trusted, never will. i hope to gain skill in combat one day and fight for my parents souls, it will never be the same never again. i once had a friend, hes probably still out there somewhere. since i was 3 i have been on my own teaching myself about the world around me, gained my skill myself 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)my character likes to fight and train, she likes to explore. she hates it when poeple try to be her friend but she hides it

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)her ambitions are to explore as much land as possible

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)hiding her true self and her past

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)fighting

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)she has light silver hair and brown eyes she also has a blue jacket with golden shoulder pads and she has black gloves

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://imgur.com/a/9fQTc

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography is a part where applicants get a chance to introduce the backstory of their characters to the server. The Application Team expects applicants to write two, lengthy paragraphs, clearly stating how their character found themselves arriving at the islands of Axios. Your biography is short and vague. What happened to your character in the past? What events changed them? How did they react to certain things?;
• Please provide the application team with a direct link to your character's skin and nothing else, as there are multiple skins present in the link you've provided;
• I would like to remind you that the roleplay in the server is done in third-person. So instead of "I walk up to you and tap on your shoulder.", the correct emote would be: "[Insert name here] walks up to the man, tapping on his shoulder.". Please write the biography, strengths, weaknesses and such in third person in your next application;
• Your character has a single strength and a single weakness. Please include at least three aspects on each;
• Your character's race has been stated to be a human, yet the biography states that your character is an elf, please pick one of the two, and focus on that one;
• "Being like her parents" is not an acceptable aspiration. What of her parents does she aspire to become? Please explain in-depth;
• We can assume you were looking for new Minecraft servers, but we would like to hear the specifics of how you discovered LotC. A website, server list? Maybe one of the YouTubers' videos of the Lord of the Craft?
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned, and vague. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;
• I know playing the character "Yagami" from Death Note may be appealing. However, the Application Team encourages you to come up with a more original character, with no reference to any anime characters;
• Your character's skin is not suitable for the server. There are many female medieval skins out there, try to get one that suits your own, editing it to the colours you desire. However, the Application Team discourages having characters with unnatural (blue, purple, pink) hair;
• Your definition of powergaming is vague and the definition for metagaming is incorrect. You may use the thread below to gain more information about them. However, please do NOT copy and paste them onto your application, as the AT would love to hear them from your own words.

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.