[✗] [Accepted] Xian Quin Whitelist Application

[BlueChaos 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: BlueChaos
How old are you?: 24
What timezone are you in?: GMT
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The Fade to black for the sexual roleplay scenes. I agree with this rule because for some players, it would be too detailed for the younger audience to know or read without the whole fade to black scenes. 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Everything made sense.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it out by a player named Redninja and some other friends who joined another server named A'therys Ascended. 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): 
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes, i have logged in once and had a look around the spawn area. 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you are acting like the character which you are portraying. 
What is metagaming?: When a player gains information about a place outside of roleplay, and then uses this information for their personal gain to gain an advantage.
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: This is when a player forces the results on another player without their consent and not giving the other player a chance to counter it.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Xian Quin
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Human.
Character’s age: 22 years old.
Biography: Xian Quin was born in 1996 in the city state of Sutica into a family of merchants. His family was a moderate sized family. He had a brother and a sister. He was the oldest brother in to carry on with the family name of merchants. One day, his father became too sick to manage the shop, so while his mother was tending to him, Xian had taken over the corner shop their family owned while the younger brother and sister did the daily chore runs to help aid in the family. 
   Eventually his father passed away, followed by his mother committing suicide. His siblings all helped around the shop to make the shop. Eventually the day came when shop lifters came, stole half the produce in which they were selling. The younger brother and sister couldn't stand by and watch them, and tried to intervene by trying to fight back for the produce in which they have stolen. Sadly this didn't go in their favour and the thief stabbed the younger brother and sister, as they were walking out. Xian after that day swore that he would take revenge on those who have wronged him. It had taken him 2 months and 3 weeks to recover from all the terrible losses in which has occurred.
   Xian had no other choice but to sell the shop off, and then start up from scratch. Working from the bottom. Xian now travels from city to city scowling the lands to get the best prices of mina for his produce. 

 

Personality Traits: Loves taking quality time searching through markets for good quality wares, likes it when it rains and loves everything to do with water. Xian hates being wrong which 86% of the time, he is.
Ambitions: To become one of the best merchants in all of the lands.
Strengths/Talents: Xian is very talented with bartering for a better price of wares, and skilled with making traps around the area.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Xian's biggest weakness is not knowing when to stop buying produce.
Appearance: Xian is 6 foot 2 inches with black hair, black eyes, has an casual opened shirt, with trousers and walking shoes. 
Skin: 

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography is a part where applicants get a chance to introduce the backstory of their characters to the server. The Application Team expects applicants to write two, lengthy paragraphs, clearly stating how their character found themselves arriving at the islands of Axios. Your biography is short and vague. What happened to your character in the past? What events changed them? How did they react to certain things?;
• Your biography states that your character was born in 1996. This would not be possible as the current year of the server 1574;
• Your character's personality traits are how he behaves. Your application only contains likes and dislikes, rather than actual personality traits. Is your character stingy? Perhaps honest? Please describe in-depth;
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera.

 

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.