[✗] Lyrhia's whitelist application

[Lythia 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Lyrhia

How old are you?: 21

What timezone are you in?: +2 cest

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): i'm aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: i did read them... only need to keep them inmind..

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Proper rp is required before pvp can be called

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): what falls under generic items ?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: youtube

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes i have.

What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is emoting things your character speak or does, keeping it to what your char knows ingame and how you have set the background story of your character, and not yourself.

What is metagaming?: getting exturnal information on events/things that are going on by forum or teamspeak, skype.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: doing things that you normaly can't, also dubbel emoting against 1 player if your with manny.

Character’s name: Lyrhia

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 59

Biography:

One day, a soul was wondering in the island of Axios, the monks found traces of her soul and made her a body to enter.

When the monks captured her wondering soul, they put the soul into the body they made for her.

After a few hours Lyrhia woke up at clould tempel.

Lyrhia first did not understand what the monks where saying and was scared, she stuberly refused and tryd to run away... when she tryd it she had some problems standing.

she was unabel to controll her new body that well.

as the monks tryed to calm her down and gave her something to wear she would lose the scared feeling over time.

Lyrhia was physocal at the age of 55 but her mind was still as a child's mind.

One of the monks gave her a name.

The monks trained her to use her body for a year, they even tryd to teach her with words in that time.

After that year lyrhia was 56, physical abel to do most things.

Aldo she was clumsy and tripped ever now and then.

Her flocabulary was still small, but she could understand most of the words and read abit.

The monks found that she was ready to meet others, and gave one monk the task to bring her to Linandria.

As they set sail towards Linandria, the monks gave her and the other monk some food for the journey ahead.

On the boat she was scared of all the strange poeple on it, she mostly staid with the monk...

The monk tryed his best to let her see that these poeple where harmless, on there boat travel days she would slowely start to trust these poeple.

A day away from there destination, still late at night  the boat ran into a rock.

As the water started pouring in to the boat, one of the crew members sounded the alarm.

Lyrhia woke up in a panic unaware of what was happening, she tryed waking up the monk.

The monk woke up and asked one of the ship crew members what was going on.

When the monk heard that they where sinking he brought Lyrhia with her bag to one of the little lifeboats and told her to stay there.

As the monk lowerd the lifeboat and a wave pushed Lyhia out of the lifeboat.

She tryed to swim but the waves keep pushing her away into the darnkness of the night.

The next morning, Lyrhia woke up Cold shervering and wet as the sun was slowely rising she would realice's where she was.

Lyrhia found herself on a small sand beach, with no one around her, just her and her bag with some bread.

She would lay a few hours in the sand shevering while the sun warmed the beach and her body.

When she was warmed up and her clothes where dried up, she got up and tryd looking for a water source.

In the distans she spotted a forest, she hoped that there would be a small pond or river in it.

She stumbeld toward this forest every now and then falling, due to dehydration.

When she reached the forest she would pluk some leaves and start chewing on them, while walking looking around for water.

The leaves tasted terrible, but did contain abit of water, this gave her abit of strenght to move on.

As she futher inwards into the forest she found a little river, she would run towards it and drink it with out thought.

After drinking plenty and eatinh abit of her bread she washed herself, trying to get rid of all the sand and salt.

Even do she had no spare clothing she would just wear the wet clothes again.

Walking for hours in the forest she would find a small tent camp with a cart... while looking around from a distans she found out no one was there.

As she aprouched one of the tents she spotted some one inside, only this person wasn't moving.. Lyrhia was slowely aprouching the entrens of the tent now.

She moved the tent door flap abit and spotted the corps of a man. His neck was slight by a sharp object.

Lyrhia sumbeld backwards, but she bumbed into someone behind her, a cold metal object was put agaisnt her throat.

The unknown person said "who are you, and where did you came from".

Lyrhia told the person her name and that she was looking for a monk and how she got lost.

The person removed the object from her throat and said "fine then you'll come with me!".

Lyrhia turend around to see who was behind her, the man like figure was wearing a mask and had alot of knife's on him.

The masked man put a blindfold on her and bound her feet and hands so she could not escape as he pushed her into the cart.

After a while the cart stated moving, only there was more then one voice now.

When the cart finaly stoped, they unloaded her out of the cart and brought her inside a warm house.

She had to wait a long time bevore some one came to her to remove the blindfold.

They told her that she would be there slave, and if she would try to run they would kill her, like they did with the man in the tent.

At first she only was allowed to do little things inside the house under watch ofcourse.

After being with them for a few year they allowed her to do more, she was around 58 now.

She was allowed to read a few books if she was finshed with her jobs.

The books where about the Crumbling tower, The order of nine and A compendium on spirits

One day they brought a nobel man into the house, the nobal man payed the poeple and had his way with her.

After this they brought even more customres as they said into there house.

this went on for 1 years longer, Her clothes where now nothing more then rags.

One late night, one of her masters ran into the home in a panic.

He told the others that one of them was arrested by the oren guards, it seems a nobel tiped of the guards he said.

As they where moving the stolen goods to the cart outside they heard horses aprouching so they left in a panic forgetting Lyrhia.

Left all alone in the house with no one watching Lyrhia, she put some bread and handy tools into a bag and ran off into the forest.

Lyrhia traveld around for 1 year long alwase bagging for money and looking for a job.

No one would hire her due to the fact that her clothes looked like rags, and she was filthy and unwashed.
(this is where my characters story begins, i dont know alot about the server...)

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) She like shiny object, storngly dislikes men and mostly humans, and doesn't like to be touched. Her habit is to be quite and observent of those around here.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a nobal or wealthy person or to be a cloud tempel monk.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) hidding, running and handcrafting things.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) speaking, reading, and trust issues.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) orange long hair, blue eyes, she's abit dirty, and her clothes are rags.

Skin: https://postimg.org/image/pornn3u79/

(read the post before looking, skin changes along the game.)

[Bardmancer 942]

Under review...

[Bardmancer 942]

--- Denied ---

 

 

Your Application has unfortunately been denied. Do not fear, this isn't the end! It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

- Your powergaming definition is confusing. Please explain it in a more concise manner.

 

- Explain your character in detail. Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography, as currently it is a little confusing and contains content not very suitable for the server.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial. Please PM me with any questions or help you may need.

[Bardmancer 942]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.