[✗] Dragonair's application

[Dragonair 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DrakerGames22

How old are you?:15

What time zone are you in?: eastern standard

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I'm aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No pornographic content

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was just searching for role play Minecraft servers

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

Character’s name: Dragonair

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Human Highlander

Character’s age: 22

Biography  I was born in 1525 raised in the settlement of Courland. One year after I was born my father died from the plague the same week Guy de Bar was assassinated.

When my father died, my grandpa told me so many times about the day he arrived at Vailor in 1513 with my father, my father was 8 years old at the time. When I got older, my grandpa told me about the Massacre of  Wett.

When I became of age I traveled the land in search of adventure. After much traveling I arrived in Lorraine.

Personality Traits: I'm short tempered but I use my anger to my advantage in battle. Something I absolutely hate are people that leave the team just if the going gets tough.

Ambitions: to help those in need.

Strengths/Talents: my ability to think on my feet

Weaknesses/Inabilities: my head becomes foggy in extreme stress.

Appearance: brown hair, no scars, light skin

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Personality traits is a part where the applicant states how their character behaves. Yours only contains his likes Is your character greedy? Perhaps short-tempered? Please explain in-depth;
• The lore you've used in your biography doesn't have any context to it, and seems to be only present to pass the rule in a lazy manner. Please take a look at the lore and link your biography's events with the lore. Lore can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• Your character's aspirations and weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their character in more than one way, also beyond physicality. A few examples would be: having a short-temper, being patient, being cold-blooded et cetera;
• Your application has only one strength and only one weakness, please include at least three of each;
• We understand you were looking for Minecraft RP servers when you found the website, that doesn't tell the Application Team much, though. Did you find it on a website? Maybe one of the many YouTube channels that has had videos shot on the server before?;
• I would like to remind you that the roleplaying on the server is done in third person form, and not first person. So instead of "I look at the man." It would be appropriate to use "[Insert character name here] looks at the man.". Please fix your content accordingly;
• Your application is missing the part about definitions. You may learn more about the definitions from the link below. However, DO NOT copy and paste the definitions as the Application Team would love to hear them from your own words. 

 You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.