Altoninjas 4th and better Application resubmition

[altoninja 6]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:altoninja

-How old are you? : 14

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? : I do speak English but i have moderately good grammar, I have a few errors.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly? : I'm able to play as much as 20 hours a week and at the least 10 hours if I busy.

-How long have you played mine craft? : I have been playing Mine craft for about 4 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I don’t know much but I do play World of War craft

-What do you expect this server will be like?:i expect it to be lots of adventures and fun

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on my friends server but he was becoming a DICKtator and he turned it from a building server to letting only secretion people be opped and the others like me have to by or find things and my friend moved to this server and last week the other friend shut down the old server

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Dwarves, Elves, Orcs, and Humans.

-How did you hear about us?: my friend

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Altoninja

In-Character:

-Character Name: Bronze Beard

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: Bronze Beard grew up in a small house above his dads somewhat successful architect business. When he was young his father taught him how to build and design houses and traps and all sorts of stuff. Later on his father was kill by a creeper while he was working on his newest creation late at night. Later his mom was hospitalized with a severe case of depression. Bronze Beard took up a architectural apprenticeship in the dwrvern capital, Kal’Urguan. Now Bronze beard spends his free time killing creeper, drinking ail, and visiting his friends for a good adventure. Bronze beard took over his family business and has become quite successful.

-Character Age: 200.

-Character Appearance: Bronze Beard has a waist length orange beard and he wears a gold and red helm he received form his father as so did he threw out the generations.

-Character Personality: He is bold and quite courages, but also fun loving and easy going. He also loves his ale.

-Your ambitions: He lives a fairly easy life making a living but his true ambition is to become an architect.

-Can your character read or write? : When he’s not drunk

-Can your character mine? : He is quite skilled, being a dwarf.

-Are you a capable builder? : He is very skilled a quite the natural.

-Can you wield a sword? : Yes but he prefers an axe or bow and arrows.

-Enjoy Farming? : No.

-Does your character have any special skills? : Yes. He hopes, and is a very skilled builder and can weld an axe and bow n’ arows.

-A screenshot of your skin:My link

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/