[✗] Application

[DanteTheGuard 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DanteTheGuard

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?:  Eastern Time Zone

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No overpowered Characters

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No I understand all rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: YouTube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I do not have any past Whitelist Application's

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes i Have as a Soul

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: Dante

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 27

Biography Dante is a 27 year old man was born in Felsen Oren. His Wife and Only Child we burnt down in his House.After that Dante is known to be very gloomy.He travels the world trying to get his mind of the death of his family and trying to sell items.Dante was also a guard but he got fired due to his emotions getting to his head and stopping him from guarding.Dante has not lost his strength once a thief tried to steal his items but he managed to stop him with no struggle. Dante will storm out if anybody mentions his family in front of him.

Personality Traits: Loves Apples, Hates bandits, Working, Animals,Loves Fishing ,Fighting ,Family ,Children

Ambitions: Dante at the moment would like to become a guard Once more but first must aquire a bit of money.

Strengths/Talents:Fishing and Fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Defense, Forgetting about family, gloominess, Gets mad when people mention his family

Appearance: Dante is a beige skinned man.Has Blue Short Hair.Blue Eyes Chain Meal Armour with red Cape

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) file:///C:/Users/nourdine/Desktop/2016-09-24_17.52.57.png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[garentoft 9265]

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application has been denied.

 

• Your definitions of roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming are missing, here’s a link to the format so you can include them next time. I’ll also supply you with a link to help out with these definitions, but remember to avoid copying!

• Your biography is very short, we expect you to write two lengthy paragraphs for your application, and you’re sadly only on one paragraph. You also only have two out of the three required mentions of lore, therefore I’ll send you a link to the wiki, which you can use to find more lore. I’d also like to point out there were many grammatical errors in your biography, since this is text-based roleplay, I’d love it if you could brush up a little on that.

• Your personality traits are only likes and dislikes, personality traits are so much more than just that, they can be things like being stubborn, brave or using words to put emphasis on your words.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.